[Denied]Pokefreakdog's Application

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Minecraft Username:Pokefreakdog

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia South-East

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:It's what I was speaking this year so Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, The Oly servers I play are Role Playing

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes and read every Pixel

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My Dreams/visions told me.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: No

Here's my skin(the top one):http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/subpages.asp?action=searchexecute Search author: Pokefreakdog

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is Stepping into another world and becoming someone else in another realm and enjoying that new life.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is utilizing information in character that your character did not obtain.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting, is the difference between attempting to perform an action on another player, and performing that action.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Jake Rythm/Sapora Vine

Character Race:Human/Reaper

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

In Jakes heart there is nothing but burning coals.

Jake Rythm was an orphan, abandoned by his parents when the reapers came. Jake was a tall young man and had flaming red hair and always looked too skinny. He was quiet and very quick but never was strong.No one else but him and a girl named Zavia escaped alive. The two quickly became friends and later on in life had kids,but in these early days they lived Ian cave together surviving on scraps of food and water. Jake would hunt while Zavia would fetch medical supplies. things went on like this for many years until they found enough wood to build a house. Then 5 years later all this changed,On this fateful day Jake was out hunting while Zavia was at home mending to the leaks, When a shadow crept up on the her and a scream later she died Jake heard this and came sprinting home crying. He rushed upstairs looking for her but found nothing,just vines choking and intruding the house,then he found her, A vine penetrating her skull he walked up to her shaking,Then suddenly she started talking in a Low Choking voice "I..am Sapora the Vine Reaper, Here to kill the escapes of the town I destroyed 20 years ago!" Then Jake remember ed the kids, Where are they?! he thought crazily,then he saw it the faces of his children smothered in vines. "No..."

Then in an instant he light a match and through it at Sapora, when it struck she let out a low moan piercing his soul until all he could hear was her. Then he saw it,The soul of Sapora going into his head. "Aggggrhhh!!" He wailed staggering around the house struggling to keep control of his body, after many hours he finally gained control,but always heard Sapora talking fto him in his head,And sometimes she would make a fine or too erupt from his body do an action then retread.

Jake Finally got used to it and so did Sapora , Jake never forgave her but eventually begun to learn to live with her.

Jake also moved out of the after the incident and went to find a town to live in and he traveled for the rest of his life.Looking for a purpose,A meaning.

What are your characters ambitions?: Jake seeks revenge on the reapers, and also wants to become the worlds best Fire/Vine Sage, To find a meaning.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Sorry it's at the top of the post

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He sometimes has Visions and sometimes Sapora takes control of his body,After the incident his left eye turn green and his right red,Other than that he will never wear shoes, NEVER!!

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I Glance at the short dwarf and go over to examine his wares, and upon finding a vine whip Sapora instantly takes over and buys it then I glance at a flaming whip and buy it too. The Old Dwarf tells me "That's a strange combination, but whatever you want, that'll be 100 Silver" I then toss over the coins and wish the old dwarf good luck on his new life and give him an extra 10 silver.Then as I turn to leave a Goblin rudely bumps into me and hisses then he looks at Jakes Eyes and shrieks in terror and runs off shouting "Half-Soul!,Half-Soul!" .

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

"Hey Orc" I tease,"Pick on someone who can give you a actual fight!"

The Orc roars and charges at me head first, I then jump up onto him and lash him with my whips then, Yell at the dwarf "Go,Now!"The dwarf then runs off into the distance and while I have the Orc subdued I haul him to the dungeons and leave him with the guards with a smug look on my face.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I rush over to the man and offer him my hand,Then after being hauled up I garb a stick from my backpack and give it to him while picking up his coins for him,Then I glance at them,"Hmm...Old man you seem to have picked up a fake coin" I Say calmly

He then rushes do me and shushes me then pushes me into a alley,"I'm part of the resistance Fool!,These are specias coins"

"Resistance" I say as he storms down the alley and runs away from me quickly,"Wow,Awkward." I Joke.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Reason(s):

Please explain exactly what kind of roleplaying experiences you have had.

You did not post on the Minecraft Forums.

The link to your skin does not work.

The "Reapers" you described are not in the lore of the server. I suggest that you do some research on the forums and/or wiki.

Same as the above, a "Vine Reaper" is not in the lore.

Your second Open Response Question contains powergaming. Someone can not simply jump onto and Orc's back and subdue him.
I also wish that you expand on this question, as it is kind of short.

Numerous grammatical and punctuation errors in your application. If you can, do a spelling check on Word.


Please re-apply in 24 hours.


If you have any questions regarding applying, feel free to PM me.
 

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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