[Denied]Fireblade248's Application Rewritten.

[fireblade248 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

 

Minecraft Account Name: fireblade248

How old are you?: 19

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time zone/United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

English is my primary language and I use it extremely often.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

I have played on roleplay servers before.

 

I may have gotten Meta and power gaming mixed up.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

I read and understand the rules completely and I agree to these terms.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:
I saw the forum post after I began to get bored of browsing the forums.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:
http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74938-fireblade248s-application/#entry615417

 

 

Definitions

 

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is taking on the life of a character you created from your own mind and using him in a certain scenario put on by the environment.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta Gaming is using out of area info that you do not have access to as a player.

EX:Someone says theyre going to kill you on the surface. Your deep in a cave and are reading the chat.

You cannot use that information to prepare yourself to fight them.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Power Emoting is using the act of roleplay to make yourself seem invincible or instantly kill someone.

EX: *Tosses axe and instantly decapitates (Insert Name)*

In-Character Details

 

Character Name: Marcus Embersteel

 

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

 

As Marcus grew from a young playful boy, who hung out with friends frequently he became interested in odd strangers coming to the town. As he aged he became interested in Asulon and began dreaming of travelling the land learning its secrets and finding its treasures. As Marcus grew older he began to distance himself from society and began to study Asulons culture and races. He had vanished from everyday crowds and began to walk in the shadows of Arethor.

 

Marcus began to travel out of the city setting up camp every day or so and eventually he came across a travelling merchant but worse, bandits. He came across an orc camp and was nearly drowned by the horrible brutes until a human warrior came and helped, he stated how much he hated the orcs to Marcus and even fastened Marcus with a steel blade to defend himself.

 

Marcus travelled the lands far and wide and he never let go of his new found hate for orcs or his anger torwards the decimated landscapes that he crossed in his travells as he was forced to retreat and take shelter as vile beasts threatened to slay him as he was powerless against them. Marcus eventually came across an old abandoned home and settled there. Marcus has lived there since and does not plan to leave any time soon.

 

What are your characters ambitions?:

Marcus wishes to slay the vile demons of the decimated lands and reclaim Asulon for the good and pure hearted.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

http://assets-cloud.enjin.com/users/1988390/pics/original/1150373.jpg

Sorry I tried to put an image but it was way too small.
Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

I have different versions of the skin the only thing that changes is the outfit. The hood can be up or down.

 

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

 

I browse his wares and if anything of use to me catches my eye than I will buy from the dwarven shopkeeper. I hand him the ammount of minas he asks for and then we go our seperate ways.

 

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

 

I pull out my sword trying to make as much noise as possible to gain the orcs attention. When he notices me he charges with rage in his eyes and I prepare to engage him in combat.

 

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

 

I help the old man up and gather up the minas he spilled and hand them to him directing him to the nearest area he can aquire a new walking stick.



 

 

 

 

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

Denied

 

Reason(s):

 

In your biography you mentioned "dreams of travelling to Asulon" which indicates that you were born somewhere else other than Asulon, which is not allowed.

 

All of your Open Response Questions are way too small. Please expand on them and add some dialogue.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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