[Denied]My Application

[Rivk Zavadsky 700]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Griff28
How old are you?:12
Time-Zone:Central time USA
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I roleplayed on a server called Calsky Island.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:My friends told me about it
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):no
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:You create your own character and act as you want him or her to b3
Meta-gaming:Meta gaming is out of game information.
Power-emoting:Trying to have advantages over a player in roleplay

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Rick Felder
Current Age: 28
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): My Name is Rick Felder is lived in Salvus. When I was 5 I wanted to become a knight when i grew up. When i was 7 my mom became sick and died. I lived with my 2 brothers Marcus and Jonathan and my dad Zach. When I was 9 I was a very smart kid and loved the wilderness. When i was 13 my dad let me explore the wilderness with my brothers.
One day my dad was killed by some bandits. My gandfather watched me and my brothers for 5 years. My grandfather adbandoned me when I was 20. My Brothers adventured and me well I explored the wilderness hunted learned to survive alone.When I was done I wanted to be a soilder and protect the land from any dangers.
Ambitions for the Future: Protect citizens and be a soilder
Personality: Hunt and fight against enemies
Skills: Sword,Bow,Mining,and fishing
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://imgur.com/5a4v2Hz



Any other details you wish to share about your character: no not reallu

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: I would see what the Man would do if he does something bad come up to him stab his leg or kick him and bring him to the gaurds.


2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Id make the bandits back off and help him fight them.


3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: Id give him about 10 minas for everything if they are bad stuff id get them for 3.If he doesnt agree i may give him 20 minas.


 

[LeRenardNoir 413]

Denied

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography is much too short. Please make it two good paragraphs. Add some server lore to your biography. Add things like locations and events from lore to help bolster your biography.Your Open Response Questions all need to be improved in length, please make them one paragraph! Add dialogue and actions to your Open Response Questions. Your power-emoting definition is incorrect.Good luck on your next application!

 

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[LeRenardNoir 413]

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