[Denied]My 4Th Application

[Rivk Zavadsky 700]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Griff28

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone:Central time USA

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I roleplayed on a server called Calsky Island.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:My friends told me about it

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http:http:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80825-my-2nd-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80885-my-3rd-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80764-my-application/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):No

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:You create your own character and act as you want him or her to be

Meta-gaming:Meta gaming is taking out of character information to influence your character in roleplay.Jake looked on google to go to a secret place and used that information to get there.

Power-emoting: When you use an action upon another character. Heres a example: John was mad at bill john grabed him shirt then punched him.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Rick Felder

Current Age: 28

Sub-race (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

My name is Rick Felder.When I was born in Arethor my father named me Rick because that was my great grandfather's name.Why did he name that because my great gandfather was a very nice man he was a very brave man to. He knew alot about the wilderness and loved to adventure forests like all my family does.My father always wanted me and my brothers to be great explorers when we grew up that's what he did most of his life.My brother's names were Marcus and Jonathan Felder.Marcus was about 4 and Jonathan was about 2 when I was born.I was the youngest kid in the whole entire family.

When I turned about 5 when my Mom told us stories and ways to be good people like say no thanks when you want some and say please when you do want something.My father started teaching us stories how everyone used to live in a place called Aegis.Even though my brothers didn't believe I did because he said that the story was passed down by great great gandfather Erohern Felder.When I turned 7 mom mom got sick and died.My dad thought it was a plague like sickness so he wanted me and my brothers to stay away from people.5 days later we got news that my mother ate something poisonous and got sick and died.It felt terrible having my mom die.The funeral was vey sad and depressing.The night after the funeral we sung mom's favorite song.We sang it every night before bed.When I turned 10 it was the best birthday I ever had.Even though my mom wasn't there I had fun playing some of the games and just ran around and had fun.That night I had a dream that my mother was standing in my room with some tea and breakfeast.My mother made the always made the best kind of tea.She gave me it I siped it I could taste it in my mouth.My father woke me up and it made me said because it was my last dream about my mom.

When I turned 13 my dad and I went fishing.We shared great memories but then my dad said," Son we need to stop thinking about mom and start learning about the wilderness,". We learned alot about the wilderness till I was 16.In my 16's we fished and farmed alot and went to markets got seedlings and that was a vey fun year for me.By the time I was 17 my brother adventured mountains, and cities like Solace. I was still at home helping my father with fishing,hunting,farming,and cooking even though hunting was my best he took me hunting 2 times a week.When I turned 23 my father died by drowning in a river.He fell into it I tried to reach him but it was to late and he couldn't breathe and died.My house was demolished because I couldn't pay for it. I was broke I only had like 5 minas.I started adventuring and hunting, I climbed trees and thats where I lived everyday I'd run through towns to keep me fit.The thing I wanted to do is become a soilder for the Holy Oren Empire.

Ambitions for the Future: Protect citizens and be a soilder

Personality: Hunt and fight against enemies

Skills: Sword,Bow,Mining,and fishing

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://imgur.com/SFeYfnZ

Any other details you wish to share about your character: no not really

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

____

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: Me: What are you doing Man: Shut up idiot. Me: Im just asking. Man: If you don't shut up *Man takes out a knife* * I Take out a axe* *he comes at me and stabs my left arm* Me: gaaaaahh! *Hits his knee with a with back of my axe* Man: How you will have to pay for this you idiot *gets up* *punches up with my left arm* *his nose starts to bleed* He kicks me in the face*. *I tackled him*. *3 gaurds come over and break up the fight*. Gaurd 1: Stop it now you 2! Gaurd 2: The one with dark clothing must be a bandit of some type! Gaurd 3: this man was trying to stop him from doing something bad. *Gaurds pick him up and take him to the jail*. *They give me a award for saving the palace*

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Man: Get away from my cottage you jerks! Bandit 1: No you old man. Bandit 2: Get away or we will kill you!! Man: No this is where I live you jerks! * Bandit 1 gets closer to him then grabs his neck* Me: STOP IT YOU 2! *runs after bandit 1 then tackles him* *bandit 2 throws me off of bandit 1* *I punch bandit 2* *Man cuts bandit's 1 leg with the small dagger* *Bandit 2 head bumps me* *I fall* * Old man stabs bandit one fastly* * I get up and put my sword through bandit 2's back. *We bring their bodies to the nearest gaurd post and then the gaurds buried thier bodies*

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: Me: Hello. Small man: Well how there fella!. Small man: We have 3 wooden pickaxe. 7 raw steaks, porkchops,chicken, and all kinds of wool. Me: I see you don't have any prices for these items! Small man: Yes yes you are allowed to haggle at this shop. Me: Ill buy one piece of red wool and i'll give you 20 minas. Small man: No. Im not accepting that price for that. Me: There is wool around here for about 15 minas! Small man: but this is hand made. *I make a mad face* Me: Every piece of wool is hand made. Small man: Yes but this has a scent to it. Me: Fine 40 minas. Small man: ok sure! *Gives him 40 minas* Me: ok thanks. Small man: any other items you would like to buy. Me:No thanks. Small man: Goodbye and have a good day. Me: You to.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

Reason(s):

 

You did not post on the Minecraft Forums.

 

Expand on your second Open Response Question.

 

Add some more actions to your third Open Response Question.

 

Various grammatical mistakes throughout the whole application. If you can, put it through Word and do a spelling check.

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any furthermore questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Moved to Denied Forum