[Denied]Deckolo's Application

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[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

 

I have decided to deny your application for the following reasons:

1.  Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. Don't be afraid to google it's meaning, just don't copy it from somewhere!

 

2.  Your definitions could use a bit more length, and please add a meta-gaming example after fixing your answer.

 

3.  Your biography is rather short and doesn't include any Lord of the Craft lore. I'll point you to the Lord of the Craft Wiki, where you can read up on our lore and incorporate it into your next attempt.

 

4.  Your Open Response Questions need more work. Please lengthen them. Make them read like short stories or a roleplay scenario with detailed actions and dialogue.

 

 

Though not a reason for denial, maybe next time remove the white backing? The contrast with the black forum background hurt my eyes a little... Just a personal request. With that said, please wait at least a full twenty four hours to post your next application attempt. This will give you time to think and to improve upon your application. If you have any questions or would like some help with your application, feel free to send me a message. I'd be glad to help!

Good luck with your next application!

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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