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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: bulldogsoccer8
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA, eastern time.
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Why yes I do.
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, on multiple servers.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Through Google. 
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthe...ed-applictaion/
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:N/A http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/!

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:  To perform and take the life of a fictional character in a game or world

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using your knowledge and past experiences in any other recent games to have an advantage against others and the world in another game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: To perform actions in a game or world to other characters not giving the character a chance to react or deny the action taken

In-Character Details

Character Name: Macaire 
Character Race: Aengul
Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

      Macaire was born on the high peak of Miylincrio. This mountain was known for is known for its untold stories and creatures since it is on the top of the Earth. He was born with the arcane powers of God. He started as a wise student in his home town of Wincaria which is below the mountain. He felt the powers of the purest magic and of lightning surge through him as he grew older. One day while he was in one of the most holy temples, he heard the mighty voice of God say," Spread thy word of purity and our past to many people around other lands". With this, he left in a jolt knowing that he must take his valuables and leave in the night with no worries.

 

       He now has moved away and is starting his preaching to others of these far away lands. Also, he is now begun his practices with the arcane abilities  especially lightning, and he is light magic become someone worthy of power. He has prospered with his love for God and the most happy souls around him the over the years. He preferably use the bow but will use his arcane abilities at hand. He is trying to please God and obtain highest of spot in ranks of aenguls. He sees the truth in all and decides whether to love those around him or to destroy them in the most vile ways. He sides with God in all but is alone. He is among the most intelligent and is with the highest of all. Or may be even more powerful soon enough. 

What are your characters ambitions?: To spread the love and holiness of God throughout the lands and to obtain high ranks with his various magics  

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:(the attachment)

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He shares his joy with others but will not be afraid to corrupt others lives and worlds around them 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.



Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I would keep on walking by him not caring about a word he says yet I would keep that in the back of my mind. Later that dreadful night, that poor dwarf had made no major profits so I briskly walk up to him and say,"Here is the money for your well doings in life. May the Gods bless you." With that, I hand him a pouch of money as a blessing from God and walk slowly into the darkness.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?


I exclaim," What do we have here, a kind dwarf and a mean Orc who is becoming quite intimidating? Leave with your useless soul now Orc or this may get ugly.'

The Orc decides to give me a look of confusion of whether he should slit the puny dwarves neck or try to tackle me

I calmly state: "I will shoot through your unloved heart before you can even cut one of his little hairs on his head. Either go now with your life still intact or I will make the sorrows of many souls corrupt your brain." The Orc realizes he is messing now with a aengul and knows he has made a mistake and sprints into the night. I help the dwarf up and tell him to find the nearest home and ask for a room with a golden ring one of the kindest of people gave me as a present that I have given him. 

The Dwarf is shocked of this kind deed and tries to do something in return. But I turn away and keep walking with my courage to my destination.


While walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character 
She helps him up after saying this.

"Oh sir, let me help you with that."
The old man: "Thank you kind man."
The weak man stares at his bag of Minas that have fallen and broken open onto the ground. He believes that I will grab them all while he is in his worst state but he has thought wrong.

The old man wheezes," Please, oh please do not take my Minas. That is all of the money I have earned in the past week!"
I quickly respond," I would never do anything like that to a soul like yours; only to the greedy and the evil of this world.
As I pick up the Minas, he reaches his trembling hand out and I slowly drop all of the Minas into his palm.
"Thank you, thank you kind sir!"
I stand there in relief and wait for his frail body and shadow to leave my sight before I know he will be okay.

[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

 

There are two major problems with this application:

 

1.  You're applying as an Aengul. You cannot do this. You can only apply as a Human, Dwarf, Elf or Orc, or most of their subraces.

 

2.  You used an old format. Please use the updated one in your next attempt. It can be found here.

 

 

Please wait a full twenty four hours before making your next attempt. This will give you time to think and to write up a new character. If you have any questions or would like some help with your application, feel free to send me a message. I'd be happy to help!

Good luck with your next application!

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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