[Denied][Elf] Application Bulldogsoccer88

[bulldogsoccer88 40]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: bulldogsoccer8
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA, eastern time.
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Why yes I do.
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, on multiple servers.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Through Google. 
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81644-application-bulldogsoccer88-ignore-last-application/ and http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81630-applictaion-bulldogsoccer88/
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:N/A http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/!

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:  To perform and take the life of a fictional character in a game or world

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using your knowledge and past experiences in any other recent games to have an advantage against others and the world in another game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: To perform actions in a game or world to other characters not giving the character a chance to react or deny the action taken

In-Character Details

Character Name: Macaire Lunas
Character Race: Moon Elf (high elf)
Character 

Macaire was born on the high peak of Miylincrio. This mountain was known for is known for its untold stories and creatures since it is on the top of the Earth. He was born with the arcane and hunting powers of his parents, a snow and moon elf. He started as a wise student in his home town of Wincaria which is below the mountain and had many wonders of his outdoors. He felt as if he could speak to animals and the powers of dark magic surge through him. With this, he went out of hand and felt that he could rule everything. So, he tried to conquer his entire region yet he failed because he was threatened with the death of his beloved parents. 

He has now had to move away or they will have the souls of him and his parents. He is now looking for a new start at the age of 18 to become someone worthy of power. He has prospered with his hunting skills and has practiced his dark abilities over the years. He preferably use the bow but will use his dark abilities at hand. He is trying reclaim his life and the highest of spot in ranks. He sees the truth in all. He sides with the high elves but is alone in all. He is among the most intelligent and is with the highest of all. Or may be even more powerful soon enough. 

 

 

 

What are your characters ambitions?: To use his powers to make the lands around him his own and to reach the top of the rankings.Also to interact with nature itself and please God in his acts.

 

Personality: Macaire Is noble for the righteousness of the world. He tries to be brave and please God in whatever he does but he gets emotional thinking about his beloved parents. He prefers to be alone but is still is just a lonely elf looking for a perfect love. Also, he is more of a shy person rather than being social and may sometimes be depressed knowing he had to leave his parents. 

 

Skills: He practices the arcane and dark abilities of magic and when he is in the beauty of nature, he uses his ancient bow that his mother gave him before he was banished. He can also wield a dagger if he feels it is needed and if he does, he uses the sapphire studded dagger his father gave him to protect himself in any situation  

 

​ Appearance: Macaire has silky smooth silver hair that is cut short. He wears the colors blue, green, white, and sometimes grayish black because these colors keep him in tune with the elements of nature. Also, he has deep blue eyes that he got from his mother and got his soft pale skin from his father. He has a robe in the color of gray that wraps around his waist with some ivory trimming that was made has wise grandmother. In addition, he wears a deep blue inside shirt and has a picture of his parents inside the right side of his robe.  

Any other details you wish to share about your character:  Macaire has a bad temper in dangerous situations and when others insult him. He likes to make plans before the future just to make sure everything goes as planned.

 

Open Response Questions:

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

 

 

 

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering.
Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child.

 

        As I slowly get a glimpse of the wood elf in need of help, I start causally walking over to him but the snobby group of high elves start approaching me with their stingy expressions. They first question," What are you here for you useless thing?"

     I then state," You foul creatures have no right to disrupt this little one's walk through nature. I would rather you all leave now before I use my magic to perish your souls. When they realized who I was, they left in rush into a tall group of bushes. I then kneel down to support the little wood elf and I give him a small knife I salvaged from a weapon rack I found earlier in the forest. he sprints into the darkness with me right behind him and from there, I know he is safe when I see him embrace a couple of wood elves of his own.

 

2.Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man

with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud.
Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open
spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

"Oh sir, let me help you with that."

The old man: "Thank you kind man."
The weak man stares at his bag of Minas that have fallen and broken open onto the ground. He believes that I will grab them all while he is in his worst state but he has thought wrong.
The old man wheezes," Please, oh please do not take my Minas. That is all of the money I have earned in the past week!"
I quickly respond," I would never do anything like that to a soul like yours; only to the greedy and the evil of this world.
As I pick up the Minas, he reaches his trembling hand out and I slowly drop all of the Minas into his palm.
"Thank you, thank you kind sir!"
I stand there in relief and wait for his frail body and shadow to leave my sight before I know he will be okay

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which

a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of
his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing fo
r you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for p
rices and the discussion involved).

 

   From the site of the puny carriage, I realize this person is among one of the poorest traders I have ever seen so I decide to purchase on of his bundles of arrows to help him make a living. I then approach him and exclaim," I'd like to have that blue trimmed bundle of arrows; how much are they?"

He then states in excitement," These right here are 40 for each bundle!"

 I then say," How about for 20 dollars for each because this price for these stone tipped, blue trimmed arrows is outrageous compared to the prices at the market? This is my final deal because I then have to make a donation to my church."

By luck, he is still happy with this deal and takes the money and I walk off now with a freshly new bundle of arrows.

 

Thank you for reading and examining my 5th application. I hope and believe this one will be accepted and I can't wait to join the many of you players who role play on this extraordinary server!

 

                                                                                                                                    Sincerely, bulldogsoccer88 (real name Mitchell)

 

[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

 

You did not wait a full twenty four hours since your denial. Please be sure you wait a full twenty four hours this time or once again, it'll be automatic denial. On top of that, I found these problems with your application:

 

1.  You're applying with magic. This is a HUGE no-no. You need to be accepted to the server for at least a week before you can even attempt to apply for magic. Magic is something rare and powerful so we moderate it to keep it out of the hands of the people who would abuse it or break lore. (Magic Applications are currently on hold pending a new system come Anthos.)

 

2.  You did not include lore in your biography. I'll point you to the Lord of the Craft Wiki, where you can read up on our lore and include it in your next attempt.

 

3.  You cannot apply as someone famous or powerful. As every other applicant, you must start on the bottom rung and earn your fame or power through proper roleplay.

 

4.  There is no such thing as a "Moon Elf" and "Snow Elf" in Lord of the craft. If you want to be an elf, you can be a Wood Elf, Dark Elf, or High Elf and each has their own lore, none of which you followed.

 

5.  Please clarify your definitions and add meta-gaming and power-emoting examples.

 

6.  You omitted the question "Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:" and changed the question "Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):". Please do not alter the application and fill it out as-is.

 

7.  Please expand upon your Open Response Questions, adding a little more detail. You're on the right track, they just need to be a little longer.

 

8.  You did not post your application on the Minecraft Forum Page. Please try to do so next time, as it's fairly important.

 

 

Again, please wait a full twenty four hours before posting your next attempt. This gives you time to think and to improve upon your application. And please note that the way it's worded, it's from the post of denial, not your application. If you have any questions or would like some help with your application, feel free to send me a message. I'd be happy to help!

Good luck with your next application!

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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