[Denied]Serenity2013 Dwarf Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following

questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are

accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: SERENITY2013

How old are you?: 21

Time-Zone: Eastern Standard Time

Have you read, understood and agreed

to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you

had in role-playing?: Mostly WoW and Star Trek Online

How did you hear about the The Lord

of the Craft?: Forums

Link any applications that you have

previously made for the server:

Have you posted this application on

the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and

shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the

following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Taking on the

personality of a character and acting as you believe they would.

Meta-gaming: having knowledge of a

game your character doesn’t that can help how to play .

Power-emoting: Forcing one’s actions

on another character against their will.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography

on your character:

 

Full Name: Ruk Ironsmiter

Current Age: 13 Seasons

Sub-race (if any): Cave Dwarf

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood,

major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

        As

a child Ruk Ironsmiter muri died in child birth and his thair in battle,

leaving him and his newly born sister t live with their uncle Gtok. Not gnol

after his sister died from a lung infection as many children did. When he

entered his fimm season, finally considered an adult, he began working in the

mines.

        After

a few season he married a beautiful female Ungor Dwed named Nal. After half a season

Nal gave birth t their first child, a girl named Higeda. Ein day into his ellifu

season he got a mysterious letter. In the letter it said his thair was still

alive but unable to travel home. He would hef t go and help his thair home.

Ambitions for the Future: maall Ruk

wishes above maall else is t find ok reunite with his gnol lost thair t make

his Khranstig as whole as possible herkans.

Personality: Ruk is very patient

dwarf who loves his Khranstig ok enjoys spending time drinking ale with his caarjin.

Skills: Ruk is an excellent fighter,

descent smith, and an expert miner

Appearance (this must include an

in-game screenshot of your skin):

Any other details you wish to share

about your character:

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section

must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event

in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or

lore at any point.

____

 

1. Whilst mining deep in the

undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side

of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks

precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do

you do?

 

Answer: Ruk knows that the diamond could

help him ok his Khranstig live conformably rugirk a half a season so he

approaches the bridge. He takes his time inspecting the bridge. After about

tuttugu minutes he decides he should be able t get across, so he goes rugirk

it. Halfway across he hears the bokk creak so he hurries across ok makes it. He

spends fjorir hours mining the diamond ok then heads home. He inspects the bokk

bridge again and decides it’s still stable enough for him to cross. He gathers

the diamond he collected and heads across.

        Halfway

across he hears the bokk creak again, so he speeds up and gets prir quarters

the way over when the bokk shifts under his feet. He thinks fast and drops the

diamond and jumps for the ledge. Safely on the other side he thanks the gods he

is alive and well.

 

2. You are sitting in the local

tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather

young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself,

and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two

shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at

the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to

approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

 

Answer:  The shady Ungor Dwedus

were getting closer. Ruk reacts quickly. He stands up and shouts “‘ey fellas!

‘Ave a drink on me!”, A real Ungor Dwed can’t refuse a free nog of ale. The

shady Ungor Dwedus pass out drunk and he decides to take care of the poor Ungor

Dwed. He asks the bar-owner if there are any free rooms for rent. Luckily there

is ein left. Ruk pays for the room and leads the poor Ungor Dwed up and puts

him to bed.

3. Whilst wandering through the

Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself

an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at

you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

 

Answer: Ruk is glad to see the

bar-owner, as he is frequently at the bar with his caarjin he accepts the ale ok

goes back t his business. All day Ruk kept thinking that it was odd that the

bar-owner would be offering him free ale and he realizes he’s been getting free

ale from him for keulimus. That night while at the bar, he asks the owner why

he’s been giving him free ale for so Gnol. He replied “Or was hoping t marry my

son ok your daughter ok join our khranstigus”.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

After reviewing your applicationI decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

 

You did not post on the Minecraft Forums. 

 

You did not use any Dwarven lore in your application, even though you answered the question

 

"Have you read the Dwarven lore, and

shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:"  with a yes.

 

I...what? I couldn't review your Open Response Questions because, well, I can't understand it. I used Google Translate to decipher some words...Icelandic? Italian, German? What? Please use English next time, it makes it unreadable for me and other Application Team members.

 

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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