[Denied]Application Form 1

[ProdigyBC 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: ProdigyAD
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: America
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on one other server, but it didn't fit my needs and thats what I think you have.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a server on planet minecraft and I thought this looked cool.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Having fun in a magical world
Meta-gaming: Strategy to fighting
Power-emoting: Ways to signal people without using chat

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Ceru
Current Age: 20
Sub-race (if any): Wood elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Ambitions for the Future:
Personality: Nice with other elves and mean to dwarves.
Skills:Great with bow and clumsy with  sword
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Screenshot wouldn't show
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: "Say you high elves if you want to pick on someone pick on me."

Dark elves *snicker and giggle*

Me *walks away from the dark elves as the little boy runs away*

 

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: "All you all right sir."

Me * helps up the old man while giving him his gold.*

Old Man " Why thank you here have a gold piece for your trouble"

Me "Thank you kind sir I will not let this go to waist."

 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: Me " WHY HELLO THERE WHAT DO YOU HAVE TODAY!" I shout

Traveler "I have bread if you like?"

Me "I will take that lets say 1 gold piece?"

Traveler "You have yourself a deal."

Me "Thank you and be safe these are dangerous woods."

 

[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

 

1.  Your definitions need much more detail and your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect.

 

2.  You did not fill out your characters backstory and future ambitions. Write a backstory that uses our lore, which you can find on the Wiki.

 

3.  No skin screenshot. To add one, go to Imgur and then drag your screenshot onto the home page. When the new GUI comes up, click "Upload". When it's done uploading, right-click the image and select "Copy Image" and then go to your application and paste it in via Ctrl-V or a similar method.

 

4.  Your Open Response Questions are way too short. Make them read like short stories or a roleplaying scenario.

 

 

Also, try to keep in mind that there's a difference between RP and RPG. RP is acting out a character in a fantasy setting, like a part in a play. An RPG is a genre of game where you play the hero of a preset story, like Skyrim or Legend of Zelda.

 

Please wait at least a full twenty four hours as of this post to post your next attempt. This will give you time to think and to improve upon your application. If you have any questions or would like some tips to improve your application, please feel free to send me a message. I'd be happy to help!

Good luck with your next application!

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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