Rameethar's Second Kharajyr App!

[cj_scout 305]

[Geo 1415]

Denied

 

Hello again.  I can't really seem to find much change written upon your application.  Your open response question is a little different but almost identical in the sense that you can slaughter three armoured humans without too much effort.  In game, I'm sure the turn out of such an event would most likely be much, much different.  I feel as if you are not noticing what you've done wrong, but myself and a few others would deem that power-gaming.  We want to see how you deal with things in a losing position, so that we do not add players into our race that will never lose.  We don't want that.  Please, go back and revise your question entirely and perhaps write a new answer as whilst I appreciate that you added that he was bleeding.  I do believe that your character has far too many an advantage that he should.

 

You may re-apply in twenty four hours.  Good luck!

[cj_scout 305]

I do realize what I did wrong. . ..I fixed it. You said in the previous application to make it so I was either fatigued or injured. I went with the route of Injury. I put in that I was going to lose the fight to the reinforcements the humans sent, and ran away. Really, I added what was necessary. But you are the app team member so I guess I'll change it. :/

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.