[Denied][Orc] Spelunkingstan's Application

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[nobody 146]

You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

 

Reasons for Denial;

Your definitions are all incorrect , and need to be longer with examples. You may search the internet to aid your definition, but plagiarism is not allowed.

 

I enjoyed the idea of an Orcish cook rather than a fighter, but I think your biography still needs a little more work; it must be longer, maybe a paragraph or two, and it must contain enough server lore to be accepted. Improve the biography and add enough lore and you will be on your way.

 

I think that if your Orc is mainly an expert cook, that he should probably be weaker than the other orcs, simply because he spends less time klomping than the rest.

 

I liked your ORQs (Open Response Questions) but they are far too short for my liking. Expand them a little more and you will be sorted!

 

If you have any further questions do not hesitate in sending me a message on the forums!

[nobody 146]

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