[Denied][Human] Vinygroundhog

[Vinygroundhog 2]

Out-Of-Character Information Please fill out the

following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the

essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: VinyGroundhog How old are you?:15.

 Time-Zone: Central.

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:I've

play on various RP servers and play The Elder Scrolls.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was

looking for a good RP server.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the

server: these are for a different character.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/24445-viny-app/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/24845-my-application-vinygroundhog/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27968-vinygroundhogs-third-app/

 Have you posted this application on the Minecraft

Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes.

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make

use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes.

Definitions In your own words define the following

terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing as a character other than yourself in a

non-scripted environment. 

Meta-gaming: Using your personal knowledge to affect your

characters decisions. 

 Power-emoting: Using emotes to perform an action

effectively blocking a reacting emote from another

character.

In-Character Information: Complete the following

biography on your character:

Full Name: Mordul "Phoenix" Byrd. 

Current Age:32  

Sub-race (if any):Northerner 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+

paragraphs long):I had a painful childhood. I grew

up the middle child in a small house in Al'Ildic.  My Father Beat me in drunken fits, as I was my mother's

favorite. My father hated my mother, and that's why I stayed. If Father didn't beat me, he would beat Mother. She was the only comfort I had other than my younger brother Marcus. Marcus was the one who gave me the

nickname ''Phoenix" after my fiery red hair.  One

fateful day I was walking to the  market when I saw

some Rangers Walking down the road.  I followed them

around for a while until they stopped at a tavern.  I followed them in, and watched them untill I was chased out

by the bartender because Father owed him money.  I walked home empty-handed, for it was getting dark, to be beaten by Father, but I remembered the Rangers, and decided to

become one as soon as I was able.

When I was 19 Mother died, and I had no reason to stay

anymore. So I left.  I had forgotten my longing to

become a ranger, but I never lost my lust for adventure.        I set out, and traveled the land.  I learned the

bow so that I could hunt, and not have to carry food.

 On one excursion I was robbed of everything I owned.

So I took a job as a merchants apprentice. As soon as I had money, I trained in the sword, as to defend myself, and

set out once more.  I set out to meditate in the

wilderness, to bring honor to my family once more, and to

find glory, honor... Or death.

Ambitions for the Future: I wish to find out the

reasons for existence, and bring honor to the name

Byrd. 

 Personality:Mild mannered, yet recklessly decisive, I have a soft spot for children and refuse to drink alcohol.

When I am alone I ponder life, becoming philosophical

at times.

Skills: An Excellent stalker(from my time hunting) I am good with a bow, decent with a sword, and have a good head for

business(from my time as a merchant's apprentice).

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your

skin):

http://db.tt/eVECUYJa 

I get the blue eyes from Mother, who was slightly more

wood elf.  ((I made him shirtless to show his muscles

and to wear dyed leather armor as clothes like this)):

http://db.tt/OnvfmJwK

I have a phoenix tattooed on both arms as a joke for Marcus

 Any other details you wish to share about your

character: I have a thing for beautiful elves.

Open-Response-Questions Each question in this

section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph

which must describe the event in full. Please be as

descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at

any point. ____

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a

dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the

Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are

guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: As I see him sneak I follow him quietly and try to

see what he is up to. When it becomes apparent he is about to

assassinate a wealthy merchant, I yell for the guards, draw

my sword, and try to occupy him until the guards came,

yelling for the guards as often as possible.  He runs,

and I pursue, trying to block his path. The pursuit lasts

more than an hour, and I  quit pursuing, find a guard,

and tell him what happened. I then go to the inn where I'm

staying and sleep.

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come

across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled

cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a

small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits -

they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather

armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: I take up my sword and angle myself behind them.

 I sneak quietly behind them, slit the first's throat,

turning to face the other head-on.  As most bullies work

in pairs, the other one runs. I let the yellow-bellied coward

run, and turn assist the old man inside.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when

you notice a small man stand ing behind a colourful stall.

You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a

variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just

about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing

to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do?

(Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion

that happens).

Answer: 

Man- "Hello sire!  My name is J'Bingo and this is my

stall!  How may I be of assistance?"

Me-"Do you sell maps of the area?"

J'Bingo-"Of course! J'Bingo sells all things, *smiles slyly*

with no set prices..."

Me-"I'll take one, and one sheath of arrows"

J'Bingo-"Aaaahhhh an adventurer.  Let us start at 20

gold for them together."

Me-"Let me see them first"

*J'Bingo shows them to Me*

Me-*After examining them*"10 gold for this rubbish map?

I'll have to update it myself! 5 off for the map. 

*J'Bingo nods reluctantly*

Me-"And 7 of these arrows are either cracked or crooked!

3 more off!"

J'Bingo-"Now wait a moment Sire! These arrows are the best in

the land! The shafts themselves are infused with steel!"

Me-"If they're infused with steel they'll be too heavy to

fire! I made a mistake coming here. I'll go to that man's

stall over there..."

*I begin to walk off*

J'Bingo-"Wait! Sire!

*It's My turn to smile slyly*

J'Bingo-"I'll tell you what, Sire, for you I make special

price, eh? 7 gold for all. Good deal, no?"

*I pretend to ponder*

Me-*After a moment* "You've got yourself a deal."

*The two clasp forearms."

[ski_king3 0]

Under Review

 

 

Your bio doesn't really have any server lore. The only thing you did use is the name Al'Ildic, which was only around in Aegis. We are now in Anthos, an entirely different landmass. Also, mostly Adunians would have lived there, which your character is not.

 

Your character's personality also seems a bit all over the place, I would either explaining each part of it and add a few sentences, or remove the somewhat contradictory-seeming information.

 

I'd like to see a complete skin without MC armour on, next time you post your skin.

 

Also, your ORQ's could use some work, particularly the first two.

 

Other than that, it might just be a good idea to add a little to skills and ambitions, as they seem a little bare. Also, if you could, in your next post make the format more easy to read, as it was a bit for me.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. I am quite tired, so I may have missed something which I'll PM you in the morning.

 

This will be treated as your first app, as your last one was completed when players were in Aegis over a year ago. Definitely not posted in the past month. You may reapply in 24 hours.

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