[Denied] Xtreme_Prodigys Application [Human]

[Proddy 2415]

[IrishPerson 693]

~Under Review~

 

 

 

 

 

Sadly I have had to deny your application, the reason is as follows:

 

• You need a lot more detail in your ORQ's. Mostly in your 1st and 2nd one. You should add dialogue and expand on the fighting scene.

 

While you are editing this app, it would not harm to add in an example or two to your definitions too! Over though this is a very good first try! 

 

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial. Feel free to PM me with any questions you might have.

 

Good Luck!

[IrishPerson 693]

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