[Denied]Pokefreakdog's 3Rd App

[Pokefreakdog 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: pokefreakdog
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone:Brisbane Time
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: 6 servers, all in which needing applications of the same format as this one.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Searching for roleplay servers
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...ogs-submission/http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85968-human-pokefreakdogs-2nd-app/ Please note the skin is in these applications, as I cannot supply in this due to computer problems.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Of course.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Roleplaying is like stepping through a portal into another world and another life which is not your own.It is also speaking and responding in a different way than you normally would depending on your charachter's personality and current position in life.
Meta-gaming: Meta gaming is using things your Roleplaying charachter's does not know and applying them to the game/story. This makes it unfair for all players around this offender and ruining the experience. For example, someone knows where to go, but their character does not, so the player goes the way they know but their character knows nothing about. This ruins Roleplaying and makes the game/scene horrible.
Power-emoting: power gaming/emoting is in which a player does something and does not give the other players a chance to react or stop it. For Example: The Orc hits the other Orc and it doubles over and the winning Orc gets promoted to Chief. This completley ruins Roleplaying for all the surrounding players and also makes the experience unrealistic and not fun.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Blue Forrest
Current Age: 15
Sub-race (if any): Halfling.
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Blue was born In an Inn as his parents, Tauro ( His Father) and Dory (His Mother) were travellers and could not afford a home. This was the thing that probably started his dream of starting an Succesful Inn. He is also terrified of spiders and so cleans things non-stop to make sure not a single cobweb can exist where he is.


His name,Blue is named after the first word he spoke. Yes, It was only until his first word that his parents named him. He had said this because of his mother and father always saying during their sea trips that all they could see was... Of course, Blue.
Now, after this the family settled in Solace, the capital of Salvus. Upon entering the city the family became stable. Tauro( Blue's Father) got a good job as a bard and gained the family many riches. While his mother took up sewing and sold it to neighbouring citizens. After then, they have never left Solace and continue living a good life.

Ambitions for the Future: To open a Succesful Inn.
Personality: Kind and caring, Although always a joker. he is a major neat freak and doesn't mind doing cleaning or daily chores for people.
Skills: Sunday's skills include; Comedy, and well, he can definitely clean.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):   Roleplay skin.png   2.48K   0 downloads 
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: Blue quickly dashes towards the nearby guards and tries to warn the guard on duty. The guard quickly motions Blue off and mumbles something about young people. Blue suddenly glances at the shadowy figure and tries to devise a plan. He then runs up to the figure and try's to jump on him. The figure quickly knocks off Blue and curses himself for making such a noise. The guards run to the noise and discover the offender. They quickly capture him and drag him off to the dungeons.



2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Blue looks around the area looking for something to distract the bandits, upon finding a largish rock and a nearby creek within throwing distance. Blue throws the rock into the creek which makes a large noise, soon afterwards the bandits go to see what the noise was. Blue quickly runs over to the elderly man, and tells him that he's rescuing him, not attacking him further. They then try to walk away from the house and within a few minutes have reached a clearing and appear to have lost the pursuing bandits. Soon afterwards the elderly man thanks Blue for his kind actions.


3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: Blue browses the man's goods and spots a small looking magnifying glass that appears to be murky and cracked. Next Blue spots a dozen or so small tightly corked bottles filled with multiple coloured liquids. Next he spots a tightly woven metal in twined rope. "I bet someone would want that" he thinks to himself.
Then he spots a stool, "I could use that" he thinks to himself, so he asks the shop owner if he could buy the stool. The shop owner tells him he could have it for 8 minas, Blue then asked him if he could get any less for the stool. The old man replied that he could sell if for six minas. Blue then handed over the money and said thank you for lowering the price. Blue then walked away from the stall while thinking of where to put

[Ford 1996]

Reviewing

 

 

-Add at least 5-6 more sentences  about Blues' life. Try including one town/city name and talk a little more about how Blue was/changed throughout the years, or how he grew up in general. Did he have any friends? How did he behave? You don't have to necessarily answer these questions, but try to expand a bit more on certain events in your characters life.

 

-Your first and second ORQ are just slightly too short. Thankfully, you put your ORQ's in a third-person point of view, but if you could add just a few more sentences in your answers, that'd be great! Include some dialogue between your character and the people introduced in the open response question as well.

 

You may re-apply after 24 hours. Feel free to PM if you need help.

[Ford 1996]

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