[Denied]Application

[snipersam97 0]

Minecraft Account Name:  snipersam97
How old are you?:  15
Time-Zone:  eastern us
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:  Yes i agree.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:  I played Warcraft and other RP games and love to RP.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Youtube and minecraft forums searching for the best RP server.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: Don't have any.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Role-playing:   Acting as a character and doing what that character would do
Meta-gaming:  Using the knowledge u have gathered to make a plan or using only what a character would know nothing else.
Power-emoting:  Using text to describe what your charator is doing (ex. *Sam face palms*)

Full Name: Sam Taloran
Current Age:  21
Sub-race (if any):  Wood Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

         Sam grew up in the woods his father died by bandits at the age of 16 however he has lived on his own using the hunting skills his father taught to live on. Sam never knew his mother she was killed when he was born. Growing up he worked outside a city the capital of the elves worked on a lumber mill for pay and lived off of what he got. 

          At age 17 Sam grew tired of a struggle for living. With no family left he knew of to go to Sam set out for big work to try to earn money. Sam has done many things on a small amount of world. Ounce he earns the money he will try to settle down in a town maybe even take a adventure or two, but that is soon to be said.

Ambitions for the Future: Settle down in a town and to go on many adventure and to travel the world.
Personality: Adventurous protective of his loved ones and friends determined
Skills: Archery Lumberjack 
Any other details you wish to share about your character: No 

[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:  Sam: leave this boy alone pick on someone your own age. This boy has got the world to see he has no shame.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]              

Answer: Sam: Sir! Let me help you. * picks up the old man and leans him against a tree* 

              Old man: Thanks Lady! 

             Sam: No problem sir my pleasure to help a elder let me pick these coins up you rest when I am done I will help u home.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: Sam : Hmm this is a large collection but do you have in bows?\

              Trader : What do I have?! only the best selection for miles! This elvish bow was crafted from the finest Fletcher with only the finest willow wood.

              Sam:  How much?

              Trader: only 250 gold pieces! Would you like to try it out?

              Sam : * shoots a arrow at a nearby apple from an apple tree* i'll take it!

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Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

 

Overall your application looked too rushed and a lack of effort was placed within it. At first I thought you had missed out half of the application because it looked so short. 

 

Other Reasons of Denial:

• Your definitions are all slightly wrong, or need expansion.
• Biography needs server lore and is way too short. Go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft.
• Your Open Response Questions are all to short please expand each answer into a 2 paragraph long answer, so you can go into detail in each scenario.

 

Next time when writing this application, spend more time on it. Please!

 

Good luck with your next application!

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