MonkeyCoffee 516 Share Posted May 1, 2013 Your application has been... Hello. After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons: First off, I'd like you to expand on your roleplaying definition. Your meta-gaming definition is also slightly incorrect, add an example to this one too, like with your power-emoting definition. Secondly, your sub-race is set as Dark Elf, however, you describe your character in your biography more as a High Elf. I presume that this is just a typo, but it's just something small to fix. Your skin, however, resembles a Wood Elf. Wood Elves have a cinnamon-ish colored skin, whilst High Elves have a pale skin. I want you to expand on your first and second Open Response Questions. Add dialogue to both and add some more actions to them! Finally, I just want to say that I'm sorry for not reviewing this when I actually said that I would. I completely forgot about that. As an apology, I'm allowing you to post again in 12 hours, and not 24. Please make sure to include that in your new application so it doesn't get denied instantly. I hope you can forgive me. Please re-apply in 12 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a pm! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonkeyCoffee 516 Share Posted May 2, 2013 Moved to Denied Forum Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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