[Denied]44Rachet 6 Human Application

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Minecraft Account Name: 44rachet

How old are you? 13

Time-Zone: Pacific

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:On multiple medieval RP

servers and a few Harry Potter themed ones

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a new LOTR

RP server.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.minecraft...0#entry21417035

http://www.lordofthe...lication-human/

http://www.lordofthe...ic/84082-human/

http://www.lordofthe...lication-human/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/87752-44rachet-5-human-application/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do

so (link above):

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and

follow it in your biography?:

Definitions

In your own words define

the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role

playing: To live or act like you are someone or something else.

 

Meta-gaming:

To use information from OOC to defeat your enemy such as if you hear there will

be attack in one place and put a lot of troops there.

 

Power-emoting:

To use your words to make the other person unable to react. Such as I shot

44rachet in between the eyes.

In-Character

Information:

Complete the following

biography on your character:

Full Name: Jack Treaty

Current Age:21

Sub-race (if any):Northerner

Past / History (include

childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):He

grew up in a small mining town where the daily things where always wake

up. Go to the mine. Finish mining. Turn in ores. Go home. And then wake

up the next morning for the same list of chores until one day he

decided enough was enough and he would travel to the city of Celestine and

try to find work as a blacksmith. So he left bringing what few minas and

provisions he had. One day on the rode he found an old man who was

huddled in a ball on the side of the rode severely beaten, worried he went

up to the old man and as soon as he drew near a group of bandits

appeared! Fighting against them with his dagger he held his own.

Parrying thrusting and dodging for what seemed like eternity. But alas

there was too many and then soon began to overpower him trying to find

an opening to run out of and then he saw it next to the beaten old man.

charging forward he burst through the wall only to fall on his

face. Tripped by the old man! For it turns out the old man wasn’t so old

or beaten after all but actually a man of the age of 30 with a wig and

make-up. Swearing for his foolishness he tried to get away but the man

kicked him in the gut stopping his scrambling. Looking up Jack stared at

the man’s cruel unforgiving eyes and the man shouted "Boy what’s your

name?"

"Jack...Jack

Treated" Jack stuttered.

"And

what where you doing on this road!"

"why

I’m trying to get to Celestine" Jack replied feebly

"Ha

did you hear that boys trying to get to Celestine! Now tell me what where you

planning to do when you get to Celestine?"

"I

was going to try and find a job as a blacksmith"

"O

so what we have here is a boy 18 trying to make his way to Celestine all alone

to become a blacksmith"

“The

men begin to laugh breaking out into tears. "well boy here is what i

have to say there hasn’t been work in Celestine for many years" then being

pulled up by the brute of a man Jack spit in the mans face saying with a

cocky smile” well wherever there is someone like you there is plenty of

work for  me"

“Aenguls

help me” Jack thought

The

man lifted his fist to punch Jack but then

stopped "you know Mr. Treaty i like your spunk but ill still have to

kill you for what you said to me. Well this is it Jack thought death by a

man whose breath smells of onions and spoiled milk.

"But

since i like you ill give you a fair chance against me" dropping Jack to

his feet as he said it

"You

remind me of myself at your age" the man said "but I almost died many

times to men like myself now also"

"well

if i turn out like you i hope my breath smells better" Jack replies

The

man belows laughing saying through tears "im going to enjoy killing you

now"

"wait"

Screams Jack

"what

is it" The man bellows"

"what

is your name?"

"Arulan"

"Arulan

what?"

"ill

tell you the rest if you beat me"

The

two walked ten paces away from each other and where each handed a knife.

The men around them formed a circle and where placing bets on who would

win.

"what

are my odds" Jack asked a man next to him

"40-1"

the man replies

"id

like to place a bet of 20 minas" Jack says cockily throwing a bag

a

man walks between the two saying when the fight will start

"5"

Sweat rolls down Jacks face

"4"

He can feel his stomach ache from lack of food and the blow he  took

"3"Better

say me prayers Jack thinks

"1"

To late

The

man charges at Jack bellowing and Jack easily side steps the man sending him

through the circle of men

"well

that was pretty pathetic” Jack taunts

the

man bellows "now boys this is how you stick a pig"

He

charges Jack keeping his arms wide so Jack won’t be able to doge them

Then

at the last second Jack dives under the man and cuts the man’s calves.

Hot

blood pours from the wounds splattering the sand.

The

man limps to the edge of the circle and Jack says "looks like this pig

has a bite worse than its Oink" and proceeds to oink to the men’s

delight. "Treaty! you have made a fool out of me in front of my men and

now you must pay"

"well

it wasn’t that hard"

angered

and

seeing red the man charges at Jack one last time and to the man’s

astonishment Jack jumps over the man cutting his back. Dying the man

says to Jack "my name is Arulan Madier"

"well

Mr. Madier it was

nice to meet you and I’m sorry how this turned out" and Jack proceeds to

walk away down the road to the astonished wide mouthed bandits picks up

the Minas he won. And then sent a silent prayer to the ancient ones.

 

 Outside the limits of Celestine he finds a boy

no older

than 10 staring at a deer in the clearing curios he asks the boy why he

isn’t out playing "that deer it looks so plump and I’ve not eaten for a

long time"

"well

I’m sorry to hear that" and Jack grabs his bow

from his pack and 5 arrows he knows he isn’t the best archer proceeds in

nocking all 5 "watch this" he whispers to the boy releasing the

arrows

and watching them fly through the air like birds 2 of the fall three

feet off another never leaves the bow but the last two strike home

downing the deer. The boy sprints faster than any human at the falling

deer and before it touches the ground grabs it. He then precedes to wide

his mouth until it was as wide as the deer and swallows it whole.

Suddenly the boy has a fit of spasms and begins to change...Into a deer

it was not boy but a transfigures that changes into what it eats.

Losing arrow after arrow at the creature he runs away. But is too slow

and the creature is upon him knocking him over picking up a rock he

throws it down the creatures mouth and the deer turn into a rock.

Getting up and wiping his trousers Jack dusts off his trousers and

continues on.

 

 

                                                                                        

The end.

 

Ambitions for the Future: To continue to Celestine and

find a new life

Personality: Cocky, witty, and Optimistic 

Skills: Stealthy and handy with a knife in the dark. And OK at archery

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your

skin): http://www.minecraft...87/jack-treaty/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Dosnt trust old people or little children

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section

must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe

the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore

at any point.

____

1. Whilst in the

mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way

towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up

to no good. There are guards within shouting

distance - what doyou do?

Answer:

As the man runs past I trip him making him fall on his face then

pulling him of to the side i say "who are you and why are they after

you"

depending

on what his answer is ill eaither let him go or return him to the gaurds

(ill

pretend that he was trying to escape from the jail for he was wrongly acused of

stealing)

"I...I...I

was a... acused  of stealing from the king"

"and

what was it that you "didnt" steal"

"his

crown"

"youve

got to be kidding me doesnt he wear that on his head?"

"not

when he is sleeping"

I

then proceed to search him making sure he is telling the truth. But

soon the gaurds are close."go hide in the hay and ill come back" I

order.

"ok"

he replies and stumbles into the hay. I then leave and

take to the inside of the city and then the roof tops looking for

cloths that are drying. Finally i find a womans gown that should fit the

man if i put a mellon or two inside where the bussom is. Buying

some

melons i return to the man and tell him to shave and put on the clothes

while i get a horse. I then find the nearest horse merchant. "how much i

ask?" pointing and a fine black stallion.

"20

Minas"

"you

want 20 Minas for a horse that belongs in glue?" trying to make him think

the horse isnt as fine as it is

"belongs

in glue does he my boy? why thats the finest horse ive breed all year i hope to

make a whole line of 'em"

"well

then you should get yourself a deal with the glue merchants down the

street because youll need them to make a profit of such a foul line"

"is

that so?"

"now

being the generous man i am ill give you 10"

"now

that i am human and must eat like every one so i want 17"

"17!

why my good sir this horse looks so sickly ill give you 15"

grumbling

the man replies "15 it is". I then proceed to return to the man that

now looks like a very fetching woman and tell him to get on behind me

asking if he has any family. I do in a village not to far. Then I bribe a

man to say to the guards he saw them go to the east while we are going

west. Trotting out of the town we leave unnoticed.

2. Whilst wandering in the

deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a

small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man

armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two

heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening

him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron

long sword, how do you react?

Answer:

I

no longer trusts old guys so he throws the sword at one of the bandits

hoping to cut him down and run away. To get the man some help hiding

his leather armor. Then running away Jack looked over my shoulder to see the

bandits chasing Jack now

“O

ancient ones what have I done now!” Jack muttered. The bandits were almost upon

him due to his heavy armor. “Well this is great” Jack called then. Jack felt

the rap of metal on metal as one of the bandits swung for him. “Have to do

better than that old bean” Jack said as he turned and rushed the two men swinging

his gauntleted fist he smashed the two in the face... The pair bent over

holding their noses and crying in pain. Jack then snuck behind them and snipped

their purse strings and taking them. Laughing under his breath he quickly went

to see if the old one was ok, seeing him all fine from a distance Jack then

went away

3. You are

standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man

standing behind a colorful stall. You approach the

stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of

general goods - he says that he is selling just about

anything and that he

has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to

haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your

haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: "I would like to purchase the bow and the daggers. I’ll give

you 20" I begin

"20

why what are you trying to do starve me! I want at least 40! Why these

dagger are made of the finest metals of the dwarves and this bow is no

normal wood but orc tusk and made by the elves"

"Well

my small friend it seems like you know your stuff. Therefore I’ll give you

26"

"26

why even a small man must eat I want 35"

"Know

that I must be going and I’ll use these weapons for the good of the kingdom and

so I can get to Celestine"

"Why

didn’t you say you were going to Celestine? My cousin lives there and no

courier is willing to take my package to him"

"What

is in the package?" I ask curios now

"Why

just salamander gut, sheep’s bladder, toads liver, human finger, dwarf

tongue, a piece of gum, toenail clipping, which where free of shipping!

gator tears, Oliphant ears, orcs arms, and an evil charm"

"Why

my good sir what line of work does your cousin partake in"

"Necromancy

“the man replies smiling at me

"Well

it’s not my problem so I’ll do it"

"O

and it will still cost you 10 Minas"

"Damn

you my short friend but we have a deal"

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