[Denied]Second Application Ben127127's (Elf)

[jamesb 218]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Ben127127

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone: EST

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have only played one other roleplaying server, but it was very fun.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I looked up "Best RP Servers" and it came up.

Link
any applications that you have previously made for the server:
     http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/87874-ben127127s-app-elf/

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes.

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: When you act like someone or something that your are not. When you play the role of something else.

Meta-gaming: Any out-of role act. (A disgrace if you ask me!)

Power-emoting:
An act that is OP, or cannot be prevented. Also known as God-Emoting.
Example: John is tied to the ground with 3 bows pointed at him. John
uses his massive strength to tear out of the rope, dodges every arrow
shot at him, then throws knives at each archer, escaping micarously.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Drazel Meto

Current Age: 18

Sub-race (if any): None

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 I was born in the woods, with two happy parents to look after me. We

were rather poor, but we lived in the wilderness, and got our food by

picking apples and fruits off the trees. We never hunted. My mom,

Shalissa, was in love with animals. She would rather die than let me or

my
father lay a hand on an animal. Every morning, me and my father would
go out, deep into the woods, to find the freshest apples. Then we would
eat them. They were always delicous. Because of my diet, I grew to be
very strong. I didn't know it at the time, but this was very important.

Life
continued this way, until I turned 11. When I was 11, me and my father
were off picking apples, when we came across the settlement Aeriel. It
had amazing designs, and was one of the most amazing places I had ever
seen. It was about 2 or 3 miles away from our house.  The villagers were
kind enough, so we welcomed them, and we were invited to join one of
there feasts. There was meat there. My mom was horrified, and my father
had to take her home. I knew they wouldn't return. The villagers
appoligized and said they did not know she valued the lives of animals
so much. I told them it was okay, and after a while, things began to
settle down. I had had a delicous dinner, consisting of much fruit, and
much salad. As usual. I had begun to like these villagers. I thought
they were all nice. But then the man appeared, the man who was not nice.
His name as Herun. I smiled at him. thinking he was kind. He turned to
me. In his hands, was a very, very, large sword. I stepped back. Before I
could do

anything, he brought the hilt of his sword down on my head. I crumpled

to the ground.

When

I awoke, my money had been taken. Everything had been taken from me.

Not that I had much, but it angered me. It angered me enough to make me want a means of self defense. I was able to convince

my parents to let me practice archery. I was a natural. And so I

learned
archery for 7 years. I was an expert by my 15th birthday. But the
villagers couldn't teach me anything more when I turned 15. So I packed
my things, including a bow that I had made myself, and a quiver of
arrows. I said goodbye to my parents, and told them my reason for
leaving. I was going to travel to Laurelin, in hope of a better archery
teacher, and still being able to live in the forest. The villagers said
it was not too far from here, and it was in a magnificent forest. And so
I began my journey. My journey was a safe one, and I didn't meet many
people along the way. After about 3 days of traveling, I arrived in
Laurelin. The villagers were right. It had a magnificent forest, and on
top of these wonderful trees, were only slightly-less magnificent
houses. Elves wandered on the roads that had been built on top these
trees, all of them smiling heartily. Instantly, I knew I was going to
live there forever. It was perfect.  That night, I traveled throughout
the treetops, asking elves where to find an archer teacher. They all
told me the same thing. "We are not much of a war nation, but of course,
we must have soldiers. Go to Captain Hardey. He'll tell you. And so I
did. Captain Hardey was a stern man, but he got the job done. I learned
that soon enough. He appointed me apprentice of Ranger Sear. Ranger Sear
was much kinder than Captain Hardey. I rented a house, and Ranger Sear
gave me money to pay the rent. On the weekends I would sell fruits that I
had picked. The elves would all accept my fruit happily, and munch away
on them. I continued practicing my marksmanship for three more years,
until I became an expert and dropped out of training. Up to this day I
live in Laurelin, the most magnificent area to live, in all of Aegis.

Ambitions for the Future: I plan to set up my own fruit shop, where we will sell the best fruits in all of Laurelin!

Have you posted your app on Minecraft Forums?: Yes.

Personality:

I
am very kind, and would eagerly help a poor man without a second
thought. I am very determined, and once I set my mind to something, I
keep doing it, and do not stop until it is over with. Above all this, my
main hobby is reading, and archery. I will also always think of others
before myself.

Skills:

I am very good at archery, and picking foods such as apples, grapes,

and other fruits. I also can survive in the wilderness well, because of

the 18 years I spent living in the wilderness.

Appearance
(this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):I have thick
blondish hair, I am rather fair skinned, both my ears poke out of my
head and curve into arrow like shapes, I am about 5 feet, 11 inches
tall, and I am very strong, regardless of my height. I have large,
leather hands, and everywhere I go I wear a thick, leather chestplate. http://i.imgur.com/HycVtEA.png   AND     http://i.imgur.com/avOEaap.png

Open-Response-Questions

Each
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any
point.

____

1.
As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering
and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves
are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

Answer:

I
approach the older elves and shout at them to stop that nonsense. One
of the larger elves turns on me, and laughs. I draw my bow
threateningly. "Lay off this boy. Why don't you pick on someone your own
size?" I see the boy scurrying away, and watching from a safe distance.
Two of the largest elves turn on me. "Ha! How about you, bud?" They
crack their knuckles. Only then do I realize they are unarmed and will
rely on brute force. Fools, I think to myself. I sprint towards them,
and at the last second dive to my left. The elf had swung his fist where
I was standing, and stumbled. I am much faster than the rest of them,
and I run towards where the boy was watching. Do to my 18 years in the
woods, I am very strong. I pick up the boy and run off before they can
realize what happens. Once i'm sure we’re safe, I walk with the boy
home, and tell him to keep clear of those men.

2.
Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old
man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the
ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold
coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the
pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer:
The old man hits the ground with a thud. I dash over to the man, and
help him up. "Thank.. thank you,sir..." Murmers the dreary old man. I
realize he's hurt. I hand him the cain, and return his pouch of money. I
tear off some cloth from my shirt, and use it to repair the coin sack. I
walk with him to a hospital, where I watch his recovery for about an
hour, until I am sure he will be okay, and leave.

3.
Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing
in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and
calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his
carriage sells just about everything, and that he's

willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do?

(Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion

involved).

Answer:

"Ah,
well, I was just taking a walk, so I don't have many Minas on me. But I
suppose.. How much would'ya do for a nice cold ale?" I ask, suddenly in
need of an ale. The man laughs. "A good old ale. How about 15 Minas, if
you don't got much. "How did you know?" I ask, laughing. "I only have
15 Minas." I hand over the money and he returns the ale. he pulls one
out for himself. "Cheers!" we clang our glasses together. I drink some
of the ale, and continue my walk through the forest, sipping ale as I
go.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

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