[Denied][Human]Seth151's Applacation

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name:Seth151

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone:(UTC-08:00) Pacific Time (US & Canada)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read and I respect your rules

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:My previous  experience with roleplaying is playing games like skyrim and lord of the rings online.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about lord of the craft as i was searching for minecraft rpg servers.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: I don't think so sorry.

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes I Have

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes I have read the lore.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Roleplaying is taking the role of someone of your thought and imagination also using the likes and dislikes knowing there weakness and strengths.

Meta-gaming:Meta Gaming Is when your use information from Out Of Character to help your character like skype or teamspeak for example Occ:Can anyone tell me where the dragon's nest is.

Power-emoting: Power emoting is when your emoting to the max  some may call it god emoting cause its when you are using emotion that are unrealistic for example *Jerry runs to the tower roof and is trap by seven orcs so he runs jumps off the roof and does three backflips and lands perfectly.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Dimitri Aragon

Current Age:23

Sub-race (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Dimitri was like any normal person he didn't come from any royal family he came from a  normal family.His father was a blacksmith and his mother was a trading merchant. Dimitri only had one brother and his brother didn't like to talk much he was more of a do it now talk later type person.Dimitri's brother was also a knight for the town guards Thane also wanted to become a guard of his town but Dimitri didn't only want to be a knight. He wanted to be a paladin one that uses the power of great will. Dimitri knew that he would have to become a warrior first and then he would become a knight then finally he would become a paladin.Dimitri's father told Dimitri that it was to dangerous and that he was to young but Dimitri's brother also wanted Dimitri to become a paladin,but Dimitri's brother and father knew that there was no way he would be able to become a paladin in this small town.

       So his father told him he should catch the next ship to Lybrith to talk to a sage by the name of Arawn.   Dimitri knew that he would need a sword and some training so Dimitri asked his father to make him a sword his father had no other choice but to agree.So Dimitri and his father stayed up making the sword that Dimitri always hoped for. His mother was scared of the idea of Dimitri leaving the town to meet a man to learn how to fight so she went to Alric's House Dimitri's Closest friend and asked him to go on the adventure to lybrith with him Alric agreed to go with him. While they were getting ready to go a boat docked and all the guards went to the boat but when they were talking to one of the members on the boat the man made the guards fly back by using wind magic then Dimitri's father ran out to the dock and got ready to attack the bandits.There were some strange bandits that wore a black and red coat when my brother tryed to attack them they used elemental magic it wasn't a normal bandit ship so I got Alric and we ran into the woods and we found a escaped passenger from the bandit ship he said that he was a prisoner and his name was Kai. We asked where he was heading he said no where but we should head to the closest town of  riverdale so we all went.

Ambitions for the Future: To become a paladin so he may save and protect others.

Personality: Brave and Strong but also quiet and mysterious.

Skills: He Is very skilled with a one-handed sword and a shield.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Dimitri is a tan with a assassin type figure and two different color eyes.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Dimitri only trust the ones that worthy enough to be trusted.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: Dimitri see's the dark figure only with there corner of his eye he thinks if he should get into this but as he is thinking he thinks about what a reward would be for saving the emperor so he follows the dark figure for some time then as the dark figure was moving he stop and quickly threw a dagger toward Dimitri dogged it barley but it left a scratch. Dimitri grabbed the dark figure by the neck then called out for a guard but as he was calling for him the figure was gone Dimitri didn't know what to 

think after that.

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: As Dimitri is wandering in the oak forest he noticed a  old man being harassed  so he decided to approach the man and the bandits as he approaches them then bandits walks toward Dimitri.

 

Dimitri: Hey why don't you two leave the elderly alone.

 

Bandit 1:Why don't you get back before things have to get ugly *slowly puts hand on his dagger*

 

Dimitri: Things getting ugly i see you make me laugh *slowly takes off the hood*

 

Bandit 2: *Runs At Dimitri With dagger*

 

Dimitri: *Gets Scratched by the dagger* *kicks dagger out his hand and slide on the ground to get it*

 

Bandit 1: *Attacks Dimitri from the trys to stab him but misses*

 

Dimitri:*Stabs one of the bandits in the chest then looks for the other*

 

Bandit 2: *flees from the battle* Dam you

 

The Old Man: *thanks Dimitri for saving him and gives him 20 gold pieces  Thank you do you need a place to stay for the night?

 

Dimitri: Thank you but have your coins *gives the coins back* But ill take the place to stay.

 

 

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: Dimitri approaches the  a stall and notice what he was selling so he start a conversation with the trading merchant.

 

Merchant: Hello traveler what would you like this fine evening.

 

Dimitri: Hello I would like a broadsword with about the same willpower or better as this sword *puts sword on the round table*.

 

Merchant: *grabs sword stares at it for a while* hmm I see this a nice piece of work you got here let me see what I have *looks around for a bit*

 

Dimitri: I am in need of a new weapon cause this one is a bit warn out its close to its end point.

 

Merchant: *grabs a sharp silver broadsword* Hows this?

 

Dimitri: That would do the job how does 1,000 gold coins

 

Merchant: Thats good enough *Gives Silver BroadSword* anything eles?

 

Dimitri: can I get 20 health potions and 9 mana potions *gives 1,234 coins*

 

Merchant:Thank you for choosing me as your merchant of choice.

 

Dimitri: don't worry man ill be off *walks away holding new silver sword*

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Your biography is a good length and had a decent amount of detail put into it but it could use more server lore. Try to add things such as town names from Anthos or notable events pertaining to your character's race. If you need help finding our lore page feel free to check this link that can be found right here.

 

Try to expand on your ORQs and don't use a list type format. Try to format them all like the first one, but add dialogue into it.

 

You could describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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