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Out-Of-Character Information

Minecraft Account Name:


ScuffDeff

How old are you?:

16
years old

Time-Zone:

PacificStandard (California)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:

Twice :)

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:

I've had quite the amount of experience with Role-playing, especially since I've had experience with many plays, RP events, and even a first-time with the
Renaissance Fair!

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:

I heard about Lord of the Craft when my brother told me about it.


Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:


First application!


Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Will do!


Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:
I have read and understood the Human lore, and even got some information from the Emporer himself!


Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:


Role-playing is taking the
embodiment of a fictional and made-up character in a fictional world while living a fictional life. In all seriousness, Role-playing is basically what it states, playing a role. Taking on a character, living a life, and partaking in adventures and fun activities all while either sitting in your room and slowly becoming a vampire.

Meta-gaming:

Meta-gaming is the action of illegally learning OOC (Out of character) information, and then using it to your advantage IC (In character). For example, if someone says out of character that your best friend is the thief leader, and the using that information in character to kill your friend.


Power-emoting:


Power-emoting is the action/emote of giving yourself an unfair advantage over the other player/opponent in a battle or another situation where there is a chance to be "more powerful" Let's say your in a standoff between two players, you and an opponent. You say: *Joe Shmoe pulls out a .22 magnum and shoots my opponent in the face.

In-Character Information:

Full Name:

Alysius van der Veen

Current Age:

33,

Sub-race (if any):

Southerner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

They say that you are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream. That was my
aspiring dream, to keep going, to pursue the joy, and happiness that embodies adventure from head to toe. "Doth begone!" I heard everyday, ringing and pounding through my head as I ran through the market square, "Filthy maggot!" was another one, scratching every last one of my nerves, as a retired to my abode just outside the city walls. Mother would always bring me hot bread to quell my angers, as that was the only thing that we had that was good to eat. We were a poor family, alas, we managed to fulfill ourselves with the growing market and diminishing "supply and demand" reference. Thou could get one piece of bread for 1 pence! Every day we would live our lives as such, and soon to come was the greatest investment and sacrifice that has happened thus far.

I am now older, wiser, and most of all, stronger. My current profession so far as a gatherer, won't do. I currently pursue a job in the humongous city of Abresi, the capital of Oren. A maginificent city, fantastic culture, beautiful architecture, and friendly people. One thing I absolutely love is the pursuit
of music, and especially the Violin. My father and mother were both musicians, and I want to take up on that offer, and maybe even become the orchestra manager or conducter of my very own symphony! One day that will take place, but until then, I am like every other commoner, waiting for that one moment to strike and take action. The realm of Anthos will learn to appreciate music in
every way possible...

Ambitions for the Future:


[OOC]
Conducter of an orchestra, Maybe even a magician under the arts of Divinity,
and a musician.


Personality:


I'd say I'm quite the risk-taker. I loathe denizens who take no pride in their ability to go forth and take life by the throat. I'm also very strong, however I get frustrated very easily. I cannot stand people who dislike the taste in music. Music is a conversation, an argument, if I may. My musical talents are
everything to me.
Skills:


Divinity
in magic, conducting, and persuading/talking.


Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):


Nicely dressed, loves the colors blue and gold.


http://www.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?/skinlibrary/human.html (Male Human Groom skin) Thanks ryno2!


Any other details you wish to share about your character:


Nothing really!



Open-Response-Questions

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer:

Alysius stares at the mysterious figure out of the peripheral vision of his left eye. He notices that that figure looks shady, and the guards start shouting. He stares at the figure, black rope, and glowing blue book sticking out of his firm grip. It doesn't quite match the description on the
poster, but he isn't one to go head-on into a battle with a being that is 10 times better in the field of magic. He walks off, and hopes the guards have it handled.


2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer:

Finding the sword useful, he goes up to the threatening bandits, who seem to be quarreling with an old man. Although very shy, and non-confrontational, Alysius finds to be especially helpful today. He’s also been particularly fond of the sword, its beautiful double-edged steel gleamed in the glistening sunlight. He saunters over to the two guards, stands with all his might, and asks “Who art thou”? They turn around, and to Alysius’ surprise, the two “bandits” were just teenagers, in their 16-17s looking for some food. “Back off, before I cut off your tongues for doths crimes!” They run off into the forest, and the old man gives his thanks.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man
standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of
general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer:

Being the bargainer he has been, and for all the experience he has had in stalls, he comes up to the merchant. “Hot bread…” he remembers it from his childhood, the odor coming from pan-fried bread every evening that came from his mother. He stares at the merchant. “Your lowest price for the bread?” He licks his lips and cackles his teeth. “Twenty minas.” Alysius scoffs at that price. “Back in
Aegis, bread was 5 minas a loaf!” The merchant sighs. “Are we in Aegis?” Alysius snorts and walks away. He doesn’t need bread at this time. He walks home, contorting the price of bread in his mind.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Your biography doesn't include enough server lore. This is an important part of the application. Make sure you read up on the current lore and find a way to implement it into your app. If you need help finding the lore page check here.

 

You could expand some on your ORQs. They are a bit vague and could use some more dialogue throughout them.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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