[Denied](Dwarf) Minningstar911

[jlongacre321 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: minningstar911
How old are you?:17
Time-Zone:eastern standard time 
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes, yes,and yes 
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:iv'e played many role playing games, World Of Warcraft, Last Chaos.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a minecraft role-playing server.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:yes
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):yes 
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes the roof shook the walls crumbled but the cave did not collapse!! 

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: role-playing to assume attitudes, actions, and discourse of another, especially in a make believe situation in a effort to understand a different point of  view or social interaction.

 

Meta-gaming:meta is using outside information to further your interest, not your characters. Meta does not help your character , it actually limits him, because if presented with the same situation you will be unable to react in a way that falls within the confines of whatever the world you are interacting in, and instead will turn to meta again, creating a cycle that ends in a ban.  

 

 

Power-emoting:- emoting, first of all, is using mechanics not alreasy in the game that enhance your ability  to roleplay in the game universe. Pe is exploting  these by doing things suck as saying you can run faster " just because". or commiting actions that are not lore. A good example of this.  where it may be  exploited, is where if i were a guard, and were attempting to capture a criminal, i would go up and immediatley handcuff him . I must instead emoute attempting to handcuff him. He can then attempt an escape using /roll, for an example allowing him to have a chance at resisting arrest,rather than being immediate. 

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:  longtail blackhair
Current Age:321
Sub-race (if any): human 
Clan (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):[/b]-I was born deep underground, in an minning settlement along the deeproad. the people of this  area were extreamly isolated, and still are. I was born to a loving father and mother, and was subjected to a nurturing home life.When Ibecame of age, I became a miner and began working in  the coal mine, the only commodity  the community could trade for food. However  this was not enough; I wanted to see the cities  of the world , see the above, and work as a warrior, as a khorok for the king. Ron has an extremely  restless spirit, and shares his villages view on how the dwarves should conduct foreign policy.It simply shouldn't  .The dwarves were fine before the other races, so they should mind their own business, not participate in wars, and certainly not let other races into their holds.-i keep the god Armakak, firmly believeing in the tenets of the Dwarven faith.To Roland,faithwas there for him in the dark if a tunnel caved in, it lightend his way; luck and chance has always been on my side in endeavors.

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: join the  Khorok Akvel, adventure with clannies, and take after his father as a re ownes warrior. 

Personality:Eloquent with Dwarfs, but utterly intolerant of other races.Restless spirit, and a stout  and firm resolve charaterize Ronald  as a loyal and fearless dwarf in battle.
Skills: mining,swords,and bows
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):red hair green shirt with black shorts with snowboots.
Any other details you wish to share about your character:Loving and can be careless at times.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

 

 

Answer: I stared cautiously at the unstable rock wandering, if there was any way around it.But their wasn't,I wait hours until I thought about it. I picked up my pick and hit it  one good time, WHammm! The hole cave stared falling in from behind me, but luckily I got to the diamond ore.I heard someone from the other side,  hello is anyone here? I heard a loud crash, help! The cave caved in . He started digging  finally he got threw, I thanked him and went on.

 

 

[b]2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?[/b]

Answer:I stumbled up in a daze,pushing the youngster out of the way.If your gonna try to hurt him your gonna have to  go threw me fist. then, some other people started coming up with me defending him.

They ran out of the tavern, two guards were chasing them.You alright I asked? Yeah he said sobbing . later I left feeling good about myself.

[b]3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:I looked back,at the man, I could of swore he was drunk, sure.We sat and talked about the past, for a while.I told him about the diamond and other cool adventures.He told me about how he   became a hunter and lived on his own.I was walking out the door when he said are you gonna pay for those ? oh sorry I  didn't know I had to,their on the house he said.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

You need to add more detail and lore into your biography. It needs to be at least 2 paragraphs if not more. You also need to implement server lore throughout it which can be found on our extensive and awesome lore page.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

All of your ORQs need to be expanded on. You did not put much effort into them. We are definitely looking for more detail.

 

You filled out a dwarf application but put human as a subrace. Human isn't a subrace for the dwarves. You can find the actual subraces on the wiki.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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