Masterkitty's Kha Application.

[MasterKitty 5]

OOC Information

MC Name: MasterKitty
Have you read and fully understood Kharajyr lore?: Yes, I have read and understood.

Have you read and fully understood the Kharajyr application rules?: Yes, I have read and understood.

Do you understand and accept that the Kharajyr application team may revoke this application in the future if they deem it necessary?: Yes, I understand.

Do you agree to both follow and uphold Kharajyr lore throughout your time in the Kharajyr?: Yes, I accept.

Tell us one unique fact about Kharajyr lore, culture or history that you know.(We will check for plagiarism!): What is found interesting by me about the Kharajyr race is that their race is, like todays society, put to beliefs of one god. But not that very thing, but it seams as the Metztli being brainwashed into the Kha's heads gives the priests all the control over the race. Putting themselves as the highest kind in the land, thinking others are theirs to command, is work of none other then religion of Metztli. Their cultural and religious bond, their placement of others behind themselves. And the very understanding of how life works beyond emotions, is the reason I'm applying.


IC Information

RP Name (This includes your character’s prefix): Daktheer

Character Sub-race: Kha'Cheetah (With elements of Kha'Pantera as it is from his fathers side (his fur is a little darker of an ordinary Kha'Cheetah)).

Character appearance (Including age and gender):

 

NOTE: The following is not Daktheer's information as he is a kitten, but an alt. application character who's name would be Ki'skar (I know it's taken from the application guide, but the character will not be used throughout the game anyway, but only serves as an application dummy)

 

An old Kha at the age of 173. From his old body, his fur is pale. He is a Kha'Tigrasi by subrace, but not of a very big strenght then an usual Kha'Tigrasi would've had. He wears a plated skirt only that can be seen that is of age. In the center of the plate is only one lapis.

 

He holds many scars apon his body. Some not noticable, like the one on his left leg. He got that scar by falling off a branch while still a little kitten. The scar was big when he got it, but yet it grew to the point where it is so small, one would have to look from close distance to notice it.

 

Some scars are big, on the other hand. Like the one not far from his eye. It came as he was carrying stone from one place to another and was not careful enough with it, or the one on his neck, which was made by an arrow that almost killed him. He was lucky as it only scratched him. Possibly, the most noticable scar of them all would be on his back, close to his right leg. Although hard to notice as he is lying on the wheat farm, if one would come close to the scar, he would notice the scar is no scar at all, but a wound.

What is the personality of your character like?:

 

Ki'skar would curently be described as a dying old Kha. But not an unhappy one. Ki'skar found that his death had good purpose. But, as he is dying came a new part of persionality, something that would come to the ones dying, leaving the world for good. Memories.

 

As he is lying on the farm of wheat, he thinks of all the things he has done. The good and the bad. He sees all of the mistakes he has done in his years. All what caused worryness, panic, rage and other things some time ago now only cause laughter, as he finally sees how life slicks by. Ki'skar remembers how agresive and full of dreams he was, but also how he lusted for her. He could still see her face within his mind. Pitty her father never liked him. He never was allowed to mate with her, even though the two of them spent their childhoods together. He knows he did good for Metztli, and by dying, he will finally get his chance to guard her, as she did guard him during his mortal days.

Biography (If you are applying as a kitten, please only state the name of your parents/siblings)

 

My mother would be Ki'lorei and my father Do'Zhadaar. link

Character’s ambitions within the Kharajyr:

 

In the presence of death to Ki'skar, he has only one ambition. One which many Kha have for their whole life. It is time to guard Metztli, as death is only the beginning and not final to Kharajyr's.

 

Although, during the time his memories went by, Ki'skar remembered of all the times he had ambitions and dreams he wanted to furfill. He remembered how the majority of them never got real, but instead of being sorry for that, he was glad and smiled as he thought those are ways of which Metztli wanted him to take. He was who he was as the Goddes pleased. That thought made him satisfied about the life that he had.

 

He always wanted to become a Ja', a priest. But he has never gotten the priveledge. Over the years, he had tried, but never satisfied the needs of the Ja's to accept him as their own. The idea of him never succeeding brought anger to him when he was younger, but nothing but more laughter as he is old, seeing how foolish he was of thinking being a priest is the meaning of his life, as to serve Metztli. He only learned later that Metztli has a meaning for everyone, wheather or not he is a priest, does not matter in any way.

 

But now it is time to serve Metztli in the afterlife. He does not do much, lying on the farm, but say his last words, after which he closes his eyes, trying to fall asleep.

 

"Metztlee. Kee'skawr ees cuumeeng tuu Metztlee. Metztlee weel suun get awnuuther guawrd."

Character’s strengths/weaknesses:

 

As much weaknesses he has, being very old, and having an open scar on his back from which blood still goes out, giving him certain death, he has one strenght that overcomes all of the weaknesses. As strange it may sound to someone who isn't close to death, it is nothing more, but satisfaction. He does not think of his life as full of missed opertunities, but a life full of filled ones.

 

As much as his life did not go as planned, he is glad of all the good memories he has of it. Satisfaction. Clean heart. No regrets. No regret is placed apon Metztli's wishes of him. He is not to doubt the Goddes. His life, her will. The thought of the said gives Kha'skar nothing but satisfaction, not feeling any of the weaknesses he has, and not seeing death, even though it stands before him.

Please provide a screenshot or 3D render of your character’s skin:

 

The picture is of the real character (Daktheer)

Situational Roleplay Questions

1. You are heading home from a successful hunting trip when a group of three heavily armoured humans jump out from behind a tree and start demanding the surrender of your catch over to them. Each man has a sword drawn and they are gradually pacing towards you...

How does your character react?

If one pray is gotten from a Kha, it is of his own. None has the rights to take what is yours, but it is within the law of the Kha'. But this is different, this is even worse, a human, the one that should bow to the race, has raised the sword on him. Although, a simple attack is not smart. Do'daktheer quickly tilts his head a little. A little, but enough to see both the humans slowly coming towards him, and the sorounding. Perhaps, a fight is avoidable. But, perhaps he was wrong. As he started running, he noticed the pray he carried is of higher weight then he could run with. The situation got worse. The three humans, seeing he was starting to flee, quickly charged on him, but stopped as Do'daktheer did as well. They continued to slowly go on him, but now, they were closer than last time. 

 

Realising a fight against three of humans is hard to win, he carefully looks and estemates the faces and armor of the humans, seeing the army they come from, the White Roses. He then finally leaves the pray on the ground, dropping on all four, making a strong growl, that has pushed one of the humans back, quickly running as the humans could not catch him. But only for now. One pray is lost, three are made. Strong together, weak alone.

2. You arrive at the temple of Metztli only to see one of your closest friends stealing the sacred blue gems from the altar, a most unholy act for a Kharajyr.

How does your character react?

 

As Do'daktheer comes to study the ways of the priests, like many other days, he stumbles apon a stunning view. A group of Kha members are sneaking about, taking items from the temple of their Goddes. As quickly as he could without trying to make a sound he hid behind one of the pillars. The group of men were yet too far to be noticed.

 

After a few minutes have passed, Do'daktheer finally attempts to go to a closer pillar, in hope he might get a closer look at the thiefs. What he saw shocked him. It was no less, no more, then a group of three Kha, all of which are his childhood friends. Stepping away from the pillar, one of them finally sees Do'daktheer. At first the Kha got scared. So scared, it seamed, his fur looked like it was going to turn white from black. Suddenly his shocked face turns into a smile. Kha approaches Do'daktheer.

 

"Duu'dawktheer! We guut twenteah uuf the gems. We geeve Duu'dawktheer feeve, but Doo'dawktheer cawn nuut tell nuun thawt we tuuk them. Guud?"

 

Do'daktheer did not answer, but got even more shocked. Not for the reason that his friend offered him to participate in a crime, but how he started talking inside a temple, not worrying of the wraith that Metztli might throw apon him. He realised his friend was becoming one of the apes.

 

Do'daktheer did not take the gems, but went outside the temple. He did not know wheather to report his friend or not. He has spent his childhood with this friend, but it is a crime like no other to steal from the Goddes.

 

As he was still standing in front of the temple, he finally made his mind. He dropped on his four and finally went to the priest, telling him the whole situation. The priest was stunned, running to the temple and stopping the group of thieves taking from the temple.

 

Do'daktheer's hidden reason of reporting his friends did consist of him becoming a priest, but he was in no luck, as the priest only said:

 

"Eet ees nuut uuf Duu'dawktheer desteeniah. Metztlee duues nuut requeere anuuther Ja'. Duu'dawktheer deed duu aw greawt deed."

3. You are in the Cloud Temple when a stout, angry little dwarf begins yelling highly racist terms towards you at the top of his lungs. Although unarmed, the dwarf continues to yell after he makes eye contact with you.

How does your character react?

 

As Do'daktheer estemates the land, minding his work, the silence is broken by a dwarf of deep sound and loud voice. Kha ignores the dwarf as he is not of his interest. Well, that is, untill the dwarf noticed the Kha. Dwarf starting yelling as loudly as he could, trying to lower the pride of the Kha, calling them beasts, animals and savages. During the rough words Kha looks at him with a dull face. On the outside, the dwarf saw nothing but a scared Kha, too afraid to land an attack, or possibly he did not see nothing, as he might have just been drunk. Such habit for a dwarf is not uncommon. Even if it was, being that the Kha did not tolerate alcohol, and even banned it, this ment nothing to Do'daktheer. 

 

On the inside however, Do'daktheer saw two things. He estemated of the weaponry of the dwarf (or lack of one), as well as his behaviour of the dwarf, for an upcoming attack. A dwarf, like any other race is to stand before the Kha, talking low on the superior race that is Kha means nothing but death.

 

He finally lands on his four starting to slowly circle around the dwarf. Dwarf did not get afraid or backed away, but only grew in haste, his face growing red as he yelled. The Kha probably circled around him for five, or perhaps six seconds when the dwarf started yelling even louder, cursing the Goddes of the Kha. He yelled so loud that a pipe fell out of his mouth. Before the pipe fell to the ground, Do'daktheer was already half way to the dwarf. The dwarf did not move and inch, though. It was clear he was a drunken fool. A moment later, the Kha's claw has already reached the lungs of the small dwarf. He fell to the ground.

 

A few moments later Do'daktheer stood up. He stood on two legs for ten or so seconds before finally moving forward, continuing his work, not looking at the dwarf. He does not deserve even that much.

4. Fire has broken out over the jungle city and you can hear the screaming of two Kha’ nearby. As you go investigate, you notice that one of your friends and the Tlatlanni’s white-furred child have gotten themselves trapped in opposite ends of a burning building. The roof creaks above you, if you were to get involved, you would only have time to save one before the building collapsed.

How does your character react?

 

It was the day that he made peace. It was the day he found out that life had a meaning. That day Do'daktheer was inspecting an ongoing fire, looking for survivals. As old as he is, he could at least wake up fainted Kha's. That is when he gazed apon his friend. He was stuck in a rubble of stone within a building. With haste, Do'daktheer ran to his friend as quickly as he could trying to save him before fire could reach him. But, half way to his friend he saw a little white sightning. Seamed like fur, but white. As he continued running he noticed it was only a child. Making a loud growl, he quickly turns to the child and starts running towards it. As of his age, he was in no way a fast runner, but still, in a matter of seconds he finally reached the buildingin which the child is located. As the entrance was blocked, and the child was high, he started climbing ruined parts of wood and stone, trying to reach the baby. Half way up, finally, his strenght gives up on him and he falls on his back. Ten seconds it was that he layed down. The pain in the back that the Kha felt was not little. Gaining strenght, he wishes to try again and reach the child. He climbed the rocks and wood again, feeling his back giving up on him, but it is his duty to save a child, he thought. After a bit while, the fire was very close to them, but he finally menaged to get to the child. It was only a newborn kitten cheetah (This doesn't have anything to do with my real character) that was lying there. It appeared white as its fur was bright and partly missing as of a newborn. He looked at his friend not too far away, but already felt the fire reaching him. It was too late, he could not save him. As he knew placing the kitten on his back could make the kitten fall along the way, and not to mention the horrible pain that Do'daktheer felt, he took the kitten along his jaws and on all four quickly started running away from the fire.

 

After finally escaping the fire, just along a wheat farm, far from the reach of fire, he has put the kitten down. He softly told the kitten:

 

"Duu nuut wuurreah. Duu'dawltheer weell pruutectah keetten."

 

A long while later has filled Do'daktheer with memories. After which, out of strenght, he finally says the words.

 

"Metztlee. Doo'dawktheer ees cuumeeng tuu Metztlee. Metztlee weel suun get awnuuther guawrd."

 

((Conclusion: Ki'skar was never a Ki'skar but a Do'daktheer... well imagined version of older him. (not counting the apperience :x If I presented him like I did kartheer, this whole thing would be a bit too obvious :s) I thought I might as well make some plot twist... If the idea is wrong though, tell me/deny me and I'll make it something else. Hope you had fun reading ^_^))

[Wretched 2075]

 

Although quite a nice application, you're right in being unsure of whether this is accept-worthy. The application isn't to simply join the Kharajyr, it's a character application. So you're required to use this character in the application rather than an app dummy. Please re-apply with one character used throughout, but keep in mind that you may use later stages in the character's life for certain questions, just state this beforehand.

 

Again, a lovely app, but I can't accept it as of yet. Good luck!

[MasterKitty 5]

Gah, knew it smelled fishy.

 

I'll rewrite the thing tomorrow. Thank you for the review in any case. ^_^

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.