[Denied]The Future Of Alvin

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Out-of-Character Information

Please fill out the following
questions as acurately as possible, ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft account name:
Changmintvxq

How old are you: 18 years old

Time-Zone: GMT+2

Have you read, understood and
agreed to the rules: yes, all of them.

 

What previous experience have
you had in role-play: I'm really good as a role-play. I thing i played 4 year
ago and was many server

How did you hear the the Lord of
the craft: I was shearching in Youtube to find a good RP and adventure and then
i found the Lord of the craft.

Link any applications that you
have previously made for the server: N/a

Have you posted this application
on the Minecraft forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Elven lore,
and shall you esure you make use of it and follow it in your biography: Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the
following terms. Do not take any definitions from eleswhere!:

 

Role-Playing: Its fun if you
role-playing then you have a story line and more interesting talk with people,
it is more fun in the Lord of the craft.

Meta-gaming: It means makeing
decision for your character based on knowledge you have in the real world.For
example, your character may not know how to make items, but you know how to and
you make them.

Power-emoting: Doing something
that a player cannot counter or avoid, example- swing my sword and chop your
head off, by adding the » I chop your head off« he cannot still be alive nor
can he block the swing, he is already dead

 

 

In- Character Information:

Complete the following biography
on your character:

 

Full name: Alvin  Margull

Current age: 21

Sub-race (if any) wood elf

Past / History (include
childhood, mayor-events. Etc. 2+ Paragraphs long) My family was pure we lived at wooden tree. I was 13
years old, my mother die a long time ago i was with my father alone. He
training me to be a good archer and hunt some animals. And i was try to learn
to myself use swords and traps. For my training i climbing at the big mountain
my father alvays say to me be carefull there and not fall down. I never climb
this hill, i falling many times at the water 
and i never give up. At then next day they come two giants at my house
and they wanna steal some items and my father say to me » Show me now your
skills what i train you« and i didn't was sure if i can kill those two giants
but i was trying to trap him i was makeing those times my traps i was training
and say to them » Giants come to me you faggots!« and one of giant follow me
and they say » Go get him and kill him« and another say »Hehe dont worry i will
kill him« and one giant was following me 
and another was stay near  my
father. Then one giant tripped some wooden tree and i shot my arrows to him and
it isn't work and he steel follow me to get me and he step my trap giant rope
courses and could not go down and then i was going back and i see my father he
killed a giant but my father he was a half dead. I wanna to help him he say »I
am happy you are alright but my time is arrived« he chought many blood and he
died. And i was so sad and i say »Noooo!« then i took my stuff and go away from
here  and i was thinking » If i will stay
here the giant can kill me« and i run away from my house.

Then i try to find new house and
to train more to be a stronger and have a revenge those giants i wanna kill
them all what he do to my father. And i was so angry but i try to forget but is
hard to forget that and i found a small town there lived some mans and elfs i
try to find a house and i dont have any minas to buy. I lived some where in the
town i have a little box to cover me those cold wind. And then someone came to
me and he say »What you doing here« and i was freezing to death. I cound talk
to him it was so cold and it was hard to say him »I sleeping here« then he
lought »Hehe you sleeping here?« i say to him »Have you a problem!« he say » No
come to me i will get some warm tea and you can live by me if you wanna« then i
was so happy to hear that i  step his
house. Then i see his got big houses i was thinking he was a noble for me was so
embressing to say something to the noble people then i ask him » Are
you noble?« and he say »No I'm not noble that is my cousin house i was a kid a
pure and then i was a travller to go to the world« and i was so suprised i say
to him »I wish be a travller like you« and he smile and he say »You can be one«
and i say » Can you train me to be a good sword man and archers« and he say »
Heh you can train here i will a little train but i must some mounth go to the
next city« and we are talking more and more and train something with me show me
next trick. And that weeks he was going that city he tells me. Then 9 years
later i choose to be a travller

 

Ambitions for the future: He wanna to be a good a travller and to be a strongest
wood elf to kill many enemy and he know he must more  learn something in the
future and find some good people to talk and maybe he will be a soldier

Personality: He was so ineteresting whant his father say to trains
and he was so wondering what looks like in world and he wanna to train more and
more and not to be in touble in the world and he wanna make new friends and he
didn't have any friends. He was so interesed what will be next time and maybe
he will find good armour or swords for fighting the enemy or his opponed

Skills: He is good with bow and his traps but he is not good at
swords but he is really good at archer and he can really good shot to the
enemy  or his target.

Open-Response-Questions:

Each question in this section
must be answered with a minimun of one paragraph which must describe the event
in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or
lore at any point

1. 
   Whilst in the mighty
   human capital you notice a dark-cloath figure stealthily making his way toward
   the Emperor's palace – crearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting
   distance – what do you do?

Answer: I will to somewhere hide and shot him to his leg he will
fall down and the knife is in floor and the guards will see the knife and then
they will understood that guy wanna kill the noble and they will jail him for
his crime and i will walk away from Emperor's palace

1. 
   Whilst wandering in
   the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, which sits small cobblet
   cottage. Outside it stands  unstable old
   man armed with a small iron blade, by two heavily armed bandits – apprear to be
   threating him. You are armed with leather armour and iron longsword, do you
   react?

 

Answer: I will wait what they will do and i know im not so good
as a long-sword but i can make at this time a little trap for him and yell to those
two heavy bandits and the attacking me and someone step my trap he broken his
leg and i try to kill the second one he attacking me and i know i dont have a
chance i will fight form my life to the end.

 

1. 
   You are standing
   within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a
   colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a
   variety of general goods he says that he selling just about anything and that
   he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices.
   What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion
   that happanes).

   Answer:

»oh hello my friend come to me
and buy something!«

» you mean me?«

»of course i mean you!«

»hmm what i should buy?«

»enything you want«

»oh this one! That seems a amazing
bow«

»oh this one she its really a
beathifull bow it is from capital city«

»how much it is ?«

»it is 120 minas and you are a
kind to me i will give you for free«

»thank you sir but really you dont
wanna have minas«

»no thanks i say to you  you are kind to me«

»really thank you very much«

 

I bowing my head  he was really so kind to me and i reached out
to receive my gift. And i was so happy to have 
that bow and i go to the forest and testing my bow.

 

 

 

 

 

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

I don't want to come over as angry, blunt or annoying to you, but I could barely read your application. It has a lot of grammatical errors in it and the English isn't really all that good. I'm sorry to say this. However, you could try and put your application through, for example, Microsoft Words and use its spelling checker! That could possibly work.

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any more questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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