[Denied]Lil_Kells [Orc] Application

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[ski_king3 0]

 

While your application was very well-written and had a good amount of lore in it, there are quite a few minor changes that need to be made before it can be accepted.

 

For one, I would caution you on making your character too strong or good right off the bat. Your character, when you join the server, should not only have strengths, and should not have any of them too well developed. Both your bio and skills sections seemed to reflect that your character had many strengths with no notable weakness, and that he was very good at what he was skilled in. I'd advise changing this.

 

Also, you are missing your 1st ORQ, and the answers to your 2nd and 3rd ORQ's could do with some expansion, as they are presently rather brief.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

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