[Denied]Kellen115's Application [Orc]

[kellen115 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Main Account Name: Kellen115

Alternate Account Name:N/A

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: GMT

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I'v played world of warcraft for some time and played on a rp server for that i'v also played on couple minecraft rp servers such as wynncraft.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:Role playing is Where you speak as if you are the character in the game you are playing

Meta-gaming:When a player is able to use knowledge that they isn't accessible to their ingame character

Power-emoting:It is where one player is not giving the other player a fair chance for expample if they are fighting one person goes 'so and so kills so and so'

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Fungo Dragonblood

Current Age:30

Race:Orc

Sub-race (if any):Uruk

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Fungo has only one Brother and zero sisters Him and his brother (Zultan) are twins.His family lived on a small uncharted island called 'Deathmaw isle'. One day the whole of fungos family went on a trip on a small wooden boat.the boat got caught up in storms and they got lost.When searching for 2 days they came across a large stretch of land called 'Anthos' and they met fellow orcs who introduced them to 'San'orka'. They stayed there.

 

5 years into Fungo and his brothers life they got hold of and axe and started hitting training dummies with their father. When they were both 17. their father went on a trip to the orcish badlands and never came back and when they was 18 there mother got captured by the undead. They was left alone with no one to train them anymore.

 

Now Fungo and His Brother scourer the lands of Anthos searching for trainers preparing for war against the Undead and searching for their father in inn , citys , deserts , everywhere.

 

Ambitions for the Future: Fungo and his Brother want to Find their father if he is still alive and if not find out what happened to him

 

Personality:Loyal to the orc's. Friendly to anyone who isnt the Undead or allies with the Undead

 

Skills:Master with axes

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): His skin Colour is Greeny yellow he is 7-8 ft tall and has a large over bite. He has ripped blue jeans and doesnt wear a top because he like to show off his muscles.

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: N/A

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

 

Answer:Fungo would go up to him in anger with his every step being more furisous and his eyes got blood shot with anger when getting in up to him he would say "wy woud yuw wnt tht?" the orcs eyes got smaller each time fungo pressed his large muscular body into him "Well the savage nature of the orcs could be gone by civilization" Fungos large overbite smiled, so so did the orc as hold his arms up to his face. Fungos smile suddenly droped as he plunged his fist right into the jaw of the orc. The orc slammed to the floor with a crunch. Fungo tried to kick him while he was down but the orc got his self up quick and ran for it. 

 

2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

 

Answer: Fungo stays near his brother and his fellow orcs readying for the hunt. His mouth was druling from exitment as the hunt begins. The orc let out a battle cry as they all start to charge. The hunt begins.

 

3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?

 

Answer: Fungo could smell the roasted halfling and his mouth watered. He walks over to the young orc as he yanks off a fresh leg. Fungo picks up the leg and starts devouring the leg in a matter of seconds his eyes get wider from each delicious bite he chews on. When he Fungo finished the leg he said he had to go and carried on travelling the barren deserts.

[Lita 677]

 

First off, your definitions need some expansion. Primarily in metagaming, to make sure you know exactly what the bounds are. Examples are always a plus.

 

You need more lore in your biography, as Cruz recommended before. He didn't mean make up town names or anything of the sort, he meant go on the wiki and find some. Also, the Undead have not been around since Aegis, nearly 150 years ago in-character.

 

You still have not posted on the Minecraft forums, and you also omitted a portion of the questions on this app. Please make sure you fill out the entire app, as you did previously, then post again. If you have some reason for being incapable of posting on the MC forums, please explain on your next application.

 

The orcs have a method of speaking known as The Blah, information on this can be found on the forums and on the wiki. Although it is not required that you use this in your application, I would recommend starting to get used to it, as speaking in a sort of text-lingo is not appropriate for LoTC. As a result, please speak normally, or with the Blah. Thank you in advance.

 

Finally, please link your previous applications when reapplying.

 

Remember to wait 24 hours after this is edited before reapplying, and please PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

Edited August 2, 2013 by Escharian
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