[Denied]Ula Dis Spadesmith (Mountain Dwarf)

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[ski_king3 0]

 

You did not post your application on the Minecraft Forum Post.

 

Your definitions could all use some work. If you require help with them, I would advise your read this wiki article. That being said, please do not plagiarize.

 

Your biography does not exactly make sense. It does not make much sense for a six year old to be learning to use a sword, and is absolutely impossible for her to be skilled in one's use. Also, why is a master swordsman teaching her when she is merely an orphan? Also, why are there orcs killing Master Skag? Is there a reason for it? It is generally very cliche for orcs to just randomly kill somebody important in a person's bio, and should be discouraged. Also, the only use of server lore in your entire bio is the reference of the blah. Please add more LotC server lore in your next application.

 

Please expand upon your Ambitions, Personality, Skills and Appearance. Try to give me at least one complete sentence, although two would be preferable. Also, I cannot view your skin.

 

Your first and third ORQ are rather short, and could use some expanding.

 

Due to the fact that this is your fifth application posted in August, it is required that you wait until September to reapply. Please use this time to review the reasons for your denial and consider them before writing another application. You may receive a ban from applying if you apply again.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

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