[Denied][Elf] Nepir

[nepir 472]

Minecraft Account Name: nepir
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: i dont know
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: i have role-play
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:  i was on youtube and was looking at lord of the rings

wen i notest lord of the craft
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...4083-nepir-elf/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: you are some one alles then normal like i saying like hi but in rp i say hail
Meta-gaming: you use the info from occ in ic like my friend knows e army is on the way and i just know it wel he is realy far away so i kan not know it
Power-emoting: you say that you kill some  one and like i say i stab you in the heart

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: nepir bloodwolf
Current Age: 50
Sub-race (if any): woodelf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): .nepir was not e normal child hee gruw up in the slums on his one stool food vrom people and is not sure wat hebent to his parents the onlie thing wat he has left vrom them is e dager wit e redwolf one it  he hase one scar from e sword wen he stool some bread from e soldier te scar is on his left arm he has onlie one eye and is he ones broke in in e tomb end e spider stool his left eye he found the armor bij e dead body he grabs it and puts it one its good en strong armor and stil realy nice end wit e littel cleaning its like nieuwe

 

Ambitions for the Future: nepir wants to join the army and be e better elf

Personality: not much of e talker and if he neets to speak he wil

Skills: he is fast and knows his way wit e dager

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): (i dont know houw)
Any other details you wish to share about your character: he is kan not use e bow (he has onlie on eye )and his eye look lijke wolf eye

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

Answer: nepir walks up end helps the small elf the older elves dont like it and looks me  he notest his wolf eye he runnes the aders are frozen he take the small elf wit him and bring him back to his parents his parants are realy happy to se him the give me 7 coints and ask me if i wane stay voor the night i say no thank

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer: i look at him and pick up  4 coints and help him get there rest i pick him up he never know dat i stole some of the coints i bring him to his home and he asks if i want some bread i say yes and take the bread and go toe e inn and pay wit the stolen coints the man says you pay to much and i tell him i dont mind

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 
i look at him and ask him if he knows e bout te deger i have i pullt it out en show him it he seys

i know the dager i sa it in e ficht ones it was e dager from e elf he helpt me wen i was bount to e tree bij some goblins he scart them o way and helpt me out of ther end helpt me to a inn he set if you se me again you kan pay me back the old man gives me some money 10 coints i look ad him and say but i am not him the man looks ad me en says you gate the deger so you neet to be some how in portent to him

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Use Google to find your timezone.

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