[Denied]Jonah 2Nd Application (1St Was Denied)

[Jonah Hus Dion 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - jovasix

How old are you?: - 13

What time-zone do you live in?: - ET US

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I roleplayed in Minecraft And Wizard 101 before.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes Roleplaycraft

How did you hear about us?: -Youtube

What do you think the server will be like? -AMAZING VERY

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - THat if ya do

get killed well rp killed your character dosent necsearlly die but if you commint

sucicde you perm die and when ya do get killed you cant come back to the place

you were at for atleast 30 mintues

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.

What is roleplaying?: - I like to think that you are acting as a character and expresing each detail.

What’s metagaming?: - someone that uses information ooc to use it in game to have a advantage over the player

What’s powergaming?: - in my words i think its when a person makes their character like OP and say "kill" everytime.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Jonah HusDion

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - Jonah Was Born In Holy Oren Empire His family was not very rich but they werent that poor. Jonah Loved his family alot and would always protect him he always helped his dad farm and his mother cook. But his true dream was to become a ranger his parents didnt want him to become a ranger becuase they thought he might get killed. Jonah was very Strong And he weighed 215 and was tall as 6 foot 2 inces.

when his parents finally aloud him to start training he was 16 he spent 5 years tranning with the best masters in Anthos traveling From Elfs all the way to dwarfs. He always got frustraed a little because it was hard work Jonah was not very smart. and one of the reasons why Jonah wanted to join the Emareld Rangers was because he got beat up when he was 10 years old Jonah didnt like geting beat up that was why he joined the rangers.

Jonah always returned to help his mother and father do stuff infact he always made sure they were safe at night. but one night A theif went into his parents house and took almost all of Jonah Parents posseions. Jonah was not very happy and tried to track him down but it was a bad descion cause why he was tracking he got sorruned by a group of theifs and they took his clothes his armor Even his sword that his father gave to him and his mothers bow.

Jonah was very mad he was crying it was like when he was 9 he was geting bullied his parents came and coughtfted him then he said he was gonna train harder and harder until he can become the best he can. and jonah did become the best he could. When he practiced on the last day of his tranning he could Use a sword very good and use a bow and shoot people between the eye. His parents were proud and so was Jonah. And Now Jonah sets out to change the world on his next Adventure.

What are they like (personality)?: - Grumpy a lot but can break a laugh and a smile but he is very greedy at times and is not afraid to kill if he haves to.

What are their ambitions?: - To become A Emareld Ranger and some day have a family.

Do they have any special skills?: - Strength And Gambling

What are their weaknesses?: - he is hot headed and he is not very fast

What do they look like?: - THey are 6,2 215 pounds, Brown Eyes, Brown hair slightly Has a tan.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Hope ya accept it

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

• Your definitions are short and vague. Please make them longer and clarify them.
• You didn't include enough lore in your character's story. You only mention the Holy Oren Empire, which is very vague. You can find more lore on the wiki. Places and events are the easiest to incorporate into your story.
• It is highly recommended that you do not start your character off as very skilled. This creates roleplay for yourself by allowing you to join and train in a military order and by extension makes your character last longer. If you'd like an example of such, my two main characters started off as nothing and now they're both powerful magic users that are very developed and are loads of fun to play.
• Your height and weight are abnormally large for a human. I'd suggest toning it down a bit. I'd recommend closer to 5' 6" and 140 pounds.

You may reapply after a full twenty four hours have passed as of this post's edit which can be seen below. If you have any questions, then please feel free to send me a private message. Good luck with your next application.

Edited August 21, 2013 by Roxforbraynz

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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