[Denied]Whitelist Application- Adgclark14

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Whitelist Application: Lord of the Craft

 

            Out-of-Character Information:

 

Minecraft Username: Adgclark14

 

Age: 14

 

Time-Zone: Mountain Time

 

Have you ever Role-played before: Yes I have,
through all kinds of different computer MMOs. And I also have played other
Minecraft MMOs, like Desiredcraft and Lichcraft

 

Have I applied before: No I haven’t

 

How did I hear about Lord of the Craft: My
friend, Jordan AKA. Raxxtus

 

What do you think the server will be like: From
the things I have heard from Raxxtus, they seem pretty amazing

 

Read and Agreed to the Rules: Yes I have read
and will abide by the rules

 

Favorite Rule: I think my favorite rule is no
villainous actions

 

Definitions:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is when you are aware
or unaware of a persons actions and what the effects of those actions will be
on society/others.

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is a common term used
to describe an action or strategy used in a game which obeys a ruleset, already
made in-game, using opposite factors to affect the game.

 

Power-gaming: Power-gaming is when in a game or
game-like system, you try to successfully complete a specific goal not
pertaining to a storyline or other factors.

 

            In-Character Information:

 

Character Name: Quentin Lazara Forest

 

What Race/Sub-race: Elf, Wood Elf

 

Sex: Male

 

Age: 41

 

Brief Description of their life: Quentin Lazara
Forest, was a very unusual child, even at a young age, he was always trying to
learn faster than the rest of his family. His family consisted of his mother,
father, 2 younger sisters, and an older brother. His family had always been
blessed with so many children. Quentin always looked up to his older brother
because he was always the best archer and scholar. His brother was a Soldier in
the army, and a very skilled one at that. His brother’s name was Lance White
Forest. Lance had always been a skilled person, and he also taught Quentin the
ways of Diplomacy and War Strategies. His mother had always been caring of him
especially after birth. His mother and him had always shared a special bond,
she taught him things his teachers could never have told him. His father was
always a secretive man, even though after work he always seemed to be on an
edgy mood, which Quentin thought was weird but never said anything. His sisters
were both younger than him and still learning to speak so when they spoke, it
was harder to understand what they were saying but Quentin never had any
trouble understanding what they were asking. Quentin was always the smartest
one in his class, but he had flaws, he wasn’t the classiest and the greatest
speaker, so he didn’t have many friends, but he always had no problem with
that. At age 35, Quentin had decided to leave his home and go out into the
world of Anthos to find a job and get himself into the inner workings of Anthos.
But before he left, his father had pulled him into his room and started
talking,” Quentin Lazara Forest, I know that you are about to leave and go out
into the world. But before you leave I think you have the right to know about
my secrets.” Quentin was shocked, he… he didn’t know what to say. “My first is,
I am a mercenary, even your mother doesn’t know this but if you decide to tell
her, please let her down gently. Also, your brother is indeed a soldier but as
a side-job he works with me as an apprentice and has exceeding good skill at
this. Now this is my proposal, I think Lance should go out on his own. And I
have asked himto take you as an apprentice, if you say no, I understand. If you
say yes, I also understand.” Quentin bubbled with extreme rage, he whispered to
himself,” My whole life is a lie.” Quentin then stormed out of his room and
stormed out the door, without a goodbye to his mother, sisters, father, or
brother. The brother he thought was the most honest, most trustworthy person in
the world, but he was a dirty filthy liar, a mercenary, of all the jobs he is a
mercenary. Quentin ended up right next to the army’s home base, he decided he
would be an honest person the rest of his life never tell a lie, and if he dies
in battle, so be it, I will die an honorable death. For the next 6 years, he
served as a soldier in the army and had some close calls in battle.

 

Personality: Not extremely classy or friendly,
but is extremely smart and uses a lot of unused words in the elven language. He
also is courageous and is conscious about his decisions, so he doesn’t take a
lot of risks.

 

Ambitions: To become a general in the army, die
an honorable death, and to defend any innocent at any costs, and to come clean
about his family’s past to his friends.

 

Special Skills: Very Diplomatic, Extremely Smart

 

Weaknesses: Not a talkative person, cant talk to
others very well, doesn’t take too many risks.

 

Looks: Short Brown hair, Blues eyes, Medium
build, 5’6”, Brown Skin

 

Extra Information: None

 

[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I must deny this application for the following reasons:

 

~ All three definitions are incorrect, please fix them, if you need help with this, you are allowed to use Google to search up answers but remember to write your answers in your own words. 

 

~ Include lore in your story/bio, it is also kind of lore breaking for your character's family to have that many children, please fix this.

 

~ Your current skin looks kind of trolly, please make it look more realistic and make sure it fits your character's appearance.

 

~ You must post both on our Minecraft Forums topic and our own forums, please do so next time.

 

You may reapply 24 hours from this post, best of luck with your next application.

[Nug 2011]

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