[Denied]Creepyelites Application

[creepyelites 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Creepyelites
How old are you?: - 13
What time-zone do you live in?: - UTC±00:Greenwich Mean Time


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Iv role-played on garry's mod a couple of times iv also roleplayed on a minecraft server that had about 25 people on but it got shut down to lack of donations
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes as stated above
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - I have not applied before this is my first ever application


How did you hear about us?: -I searched fun role-playing minecraft server i though i would find ones like garrys mod (gangsters and that) But i found one even better! This one with dwarves humans ect 
What do you think the server will be like? - I think this server will be amazing and friendly and when i log on there will be others in the race i want to be offering me a place to stay and teach me the basics.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes iv read the rules
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most: Number 7 "When you set up a minecraft skin make sure it suites that role you play" because it would make no sense to be talking to an human and hes minecraft skin is a goblin for example or a animal 
 
What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is acting in a way that others can join in and help with the flow so everything runs smooth and you don't get a conversation like this "James my dear human we need your help to rally against the elves" then someone says "Why this is just a game..." they take everyone out of the "zone" and cant stop them playing how they like to play

What’s metagaming?: - For exsample i see someones minecraft name lets say mine creepyelites and i walk up and say "Hey creepyelites" but he does not know me/met me in a roleplaying style hes just looked up and saw my name and talking in ooc in a roleplaying way 

What’s powergaming?: -Roleplaying but giving the other person no chance so it could be like this "draw your sword fellow human we will settle this in a duel" and then the other human trys to reason "No sir I would wish not to" then the other guy just say "no we are dueling" then starts to hit him
 
What’s your character called?: - Thonthen

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Dwarve, The Mountain Dwarf 

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 27

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - They grew up with their dwarf parents in a mountain like most dwarves and they trained long hard days his childhood was nice and calm no attack had been.

What are they like (personality)?: - My Dwarf is a friendly dwarf but if you get on the wrong side of him he will try to fight you he also has a bit of an anger issue (short temper)

What are their ambitions?: - To defend his fellow dwarves

Do they have any special skills?: - Just a good axe wielder 

What are their weaknesses?: - Because of his short temper he can easily be annoyed on purpose then "baited" into places he does not want to go without noticing with the only attempt to hurt the other person

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Hes a dwarf with a brown beard reach just above his waist with a gold band round each and he has some sorts of armor on and he also has his favorite axe on his back  

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He loves a good old fight he defends his village when ever he can and rushes to an ally's aid when needed



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  Sorry did not have enough space to upload a back screen shot 

 

Also thanks for reading

[aron. 427]

 

Unfortunately, your application has been denied for the following:

 

- Your roleplaying definition was incorrect. 

-Your definition for powergaming was slightly incorrect. While the definition its self was correct, your example was a little bit off. 

- Your bio was lacking in subtance. Try and add some back story into your character, as well as lore. If you aren't sure about our lore, you can read up on virtually everything here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

If you need any help with your definitions, or biography, do not hesitate to pop me a private message; I'd be more than willing to help

 

You may reapply in 24 hours

[aron. 427]

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