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An insane keeper read the missive from beneath a sewer grate, mold and rust covering his body. "There goes my status as interim Luminary, I hope they lumin their nary better than I did."

The last true keeper of the Red Faith watched this missive appear in his workshop. His hazy eyes opened and his rusted voice box began to move after years and years of stagnation. Orin Ve'lvenest, keeper of over a hundred and fifty years, faithful to the hearth, began to laugh. For he was simply an old fool, what did he know of politics.

A rusted, rotten, ragged man rested in a ruined room and reclined his head to read the ruling. "Cringe." Then he returned to his ravings and rants with the rats around himself.

I dont expect this to be taken as a surprise. I've been missing for quite a while already, but I think its my time to take a well deserved break. There's a lot I've wanted to say, too much to say in a reasonable time so i just won't, I've even neglected to write this because I feel as a post is just a massive waste of everyone's time. There's plenty of people I'll miss too, I dont have a proper count either or I'd be listing people who left already or are on hiatus, banned, etc. Anyway, dont expect my characters to be pked. Ill be back around in a year or two when I remember this place exists.

An old man grumbled as he rotted away in his cave, awaiting for the day he was not rabid with rage to release himself once more. "HE gets a threat from the church and I hardly get acknowledged at all, why are my actions not treated with such importance? Do I have to kill a pontiff to get recognized?"

In the damp darkness of the norlandic sewers a red robed monk sat at a grinding wheel, sharpening an executioner axe. One hand crafted for a very specific purpose. Ferrum forged and wrought from the nearby mines for the blade. Wood from the trees in the forests cut and shaped to a handle. And a single name carved upon the grip. Uniquely made to make the receiver feel the weight of their sins.

Not exactly a fan of the lesser mutation change. There is no real difference between a tawkinist without a klone and a normal descendant, speaking purely about how their bodies are made. This redline doesn't even state how klones or homunculi would be effected. Could they change as much as they want?

The Diviner of Flames watched the letter slip under his door during a long night of study. He stared blankly as he read through the letter, comfortable in his robe polka-dot and bunny slippers. "Seems your time came, you will still provide useful my dear Vildr, even after death."

This has gotten much better since its initial release, very excited to see where it goes.

Orin Vel'venest in his workshop fr fr

Has a weird spell arrayment for a 3 Slot magic. Lots of T1 spells. Only one T5 spell. Also... just a query. How is this compatible with heralds? (I have a lot more to read, I like how its a lot more tame compared to the other human magic being submitted right now. Not clearly canonist so its easier to adapt into other communities but some of the wording feels very norlandic heavy but that might just be me)

As stated in last post. Not much lore reason for the redlines to act that way. Should still exist in a radius if anything since once again as stated. There's no real soul connection between a magic caster & a pet other than giving orders. What about pets without one consistent owner outside of crp?

I have many opinions on this but I'll stick to just a few to not create a massive unreadable paragraph. Servants and pets, rather than being disabled due to any magic use, should be disabled due to voidal magic use. There is precedent for that in machine spirits being weakened by the use of voidal magics. That and pets of any Tier aren't really 'bound' to the user unless you have an obedience module and thats not exactly soul magic. I don't know why magic being cast by the user should shut them off. Should have any magic cast in say, a 3x3 disables it instead of magic cast by the user. Machine Spirits, you've seen roughly the same opinions from people above so I won't repeat those statements 1-1. Having a clear definition of what constitutes an actual dead & loss of a body is nice to have. I do have some qualms about the limit of 3 machine spirits only. If you are trying to make it more similar to klones you should realize how wildly different the two methods are. Klones are a much more time consuming method, you aren't going to be hopping bodies all the time considering the quality you can put into them without a MArt. Although they each last much longer. Machine Spirits on the other hand can be made in roughly a week at best or two without help. Though they are much more simple, you won't really get a bunch of 'mutations' put into each spirit so in exchange for quality you have quantity. As it stands, wonderful formatting. Good to see some thought put into the process, but personally not a fan.

gonna find some flaws in it for when the event rolls around

A very old Mali slowly makes his way through the southern nations when he receives the news. "Well there goes one of my favorite puppets, I wonder if I'll be able to steal the body away before it's burned."

I've given my thoughts on it already but I suppose I can drop a reply here too. Very good re-write. Seems like everything slots in place and nothing important seems to be left up to interpretation. Fits much better into an FA category.

Holy shit this really is a hotfix, actually telling me how many slots it takes up. That's amazing.

"Well Well Well. I expected this eventually, but not immediately." An old man laughed to himself as he finished a bottle of wine that he was slowly becoming addicted to

Maybe only allow people who make a klone to make a TA?

That would fall in line with animatii lore with machine spirits since that is also a way to disregard the monks natural revival method. Though it's not hard to track, it is supposed to be listed on your FA when you get taught klones.

Orin is excited to see how quickly he can break this new Treaty

Orin stands along the group norlanders and raises a pointed finger. Asking the ever important question. "Yes who, but WHY is Mary."

I CAN WELD AGAIN

Orin gets his many costumes out again, wondering what to wear this time.

So this is what you were trying to show me, to be honest how you go about using other alchemy to alter animatii is really interesting. Amazing idea, now let's go to the judges.