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This is an important guide, I hope players take the time to actually read this.

Redlines should detail limitations of lore. I don't think you should put half the relevant lore in the redlines. The creation ritual for this piece is incredibly dull and boring. It'd probably be beneficial to include sections on physiology and behaviour rather than it being haphazardly hidden across creation, hatching and awakening. Take a good look at this recent lore submission by the player Spindle.

Tribute. Slaves. Sacrifice. Strength. A withdrawn Uruk laments the forgotten.

A brother of honour bristled with rage. None but the apostate Uruk disrespects the legacy of the very Ancestors they claim to hallow. A handful of missives were soon defaced with white ochre-paint.

shartings ur comments are aids to read btw

I would like to see lore include aliases, especially with more uncommon pieces. I don't like that every character refers to naztherak as naztherak, instead of infernal sorcery, hel magic, demon-casting, or something that doesn't feel scientifically accurate. The common name implies common understanding of things that shouldn't be so casual. I dread to see every character know this as kani

The corpse remains unattended in the impoverished Molehill district, Providence. Unbeknownst to all but their captor, the requestor were immured to the torturous prison that is Hel; thus, to be seen unfaithful by the bounty's claimant. @A Friend

[!] Parchments within Providence & Celianor read: WANTED DEAD FOR THE CRIMES OF BANDITRY; INDECENCY; ARCANE ASSAULT; ROBBERY. MALI'AHERAL; 6'; BLONDE HAIR (NECK-LENGTH); BURN DAMAGE (NECK & FACE); METALLIC LIMB (LEFT ARM); IRIS - DULL GREEN; ATTIRE - BLACK COAT. OFTEN WITNESSED IN CITY OF CELIANOR; PRESUMED RESIDENT OF CITY OF HAELUN'OR. WARNING: ABYSSAL SORCERER REWARD: UPON PROVISION OF CORPSE, OR METALLIC LIMB, THEE SHALL BE PROVIDED FIVE-HUNDRED MINA AND ADDITIONAL REWARD (UNDISCLOSED). TO CONTACT: WITHIN THE BEAK OF A CROW'S CORPSE, IN THE MOLEHILL DISTRICT, CITY OF PROVIDENCE, PROVIDE PREFERRED LOCATION OF BOUNTY COLLECTION. [[Contact on forums if required]]

its always ooc community leader = irp character leader i dont like it

The Friar knows the virtue of purity.

A lone orc beneath the same stark moonlight, in those bitter winds, ruminated upon his faith. The uruk subscribed to no belief but his own; his conviction rooted deep in the Immortal Spirits whose domain drew as far as the natural, material and abstract realms. Nevertheless, no doubt nor disbelief were given to the merits of his brothers' beliefs- The Blood Faith, or The Great Ancestors. It was The Blood Faith's maxim that he considered; “Grizh tu flow… Grizh tu peep…” He could assign no coincidence to the advent of the Haruspex practice and the interpretation of The Blood Faith. Grizh must flow, for the Haruspex to show; Grizh will be seen, for the blind to see. Haruspex; the practice of the Prophet, who shall deliver to all the incontrovertible recognition of the Great Spirits. The young Uruk were no Prophet; this were not his duty. The zealous brother were a champion of the Spirits; his duty were to ensure the Prophets' duty; to protect and amplify the realm of the Spirit. ((Great writing, love to see this kind of Spirit rp))