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This is an important guide, I hope players take the time to actually read this.

Redlines should detail limitations of lore. I don't think you should put half the relevant lore in the redlines. The creation ritual for this piece is incredibly dull and boring. It'd probably be beneficial to include sections on physiology and behaviour rather than it being haphazardly hidden across creation, hatching and awakening. Take a good look at this recent lore submission by the player Spindle.

This is a cool rp initiative. I missed the recurring bi-elven-weekly bit, thanks.

A practicing physician welcomes the invitation. what is the time frame?

Tribute. Slaves. Sacrifice. Strength. A withdrawn Uruk laments the forgotten.

On the road that lead Celia'nor, a foreigner's eye had lingered on the passing soul, obscured by the dismal tinted lense of its birdlike visage.

A brother of honour bristled with rage. None but the apostate Uruk disrespects the legacy of the very Ancestors they claim to hallow. A handful of missives were soon defaced with white ochre-paint.

shartings ur comments are aids to read btw

I would like to see lore include aliases, especially with more uncommon pieces. I don't like that every character refers to naztherak as naztherak, instead of infernal sorcery, hel magic, demon-casting, or something that doesn't feel scientifically accurate. The common name implies common understanding of things that shouldn't be so casual. I dread to see every character know this as kani

The corpse remains unattended in the impoverished Molehill district, Providence. Unbeknownst to all but their captor, the requestor were immured to the torturous prison that is Hel; thus, to be seen unfaithful by the bounty's claimant. @A Friend

[!] Parchments within Providence & Celianor read: WANTED DEAD FOR THE CRIMES OF BANDITRY; INDECENCY; ARCANE ASSAULT; ROBBERY. MALI'AHERAL; 6'; BLONDE HAIR (NECK-LENGTH); BURN DAMAGE (NECK & FACE); METALLIC LIMB (LEFT ARM); IRIS - DULL GREEN; ATTIRE - BLACK COAT. OFTEN WITNESSED IN CITY OF CELIANOR; PRESUMED RESIDENT OF CITY OF HAELUN'OR. WARNING: ABYSSAL SORCERER REWARD: UPON PROVISION OF CORPSE, OR METALLIC LIMB, THEE SHALL BE PROVIDED FIVE-HUNDRED MINA AND ADDITIONAL REWARD (UNDISCLOSED). TO CONTACT: WITHIN THE BEAK OF A CROW'S CORPSE, IN THE MOLEHILL DISTRICT, CITY OF PROVIDENCE, PROVIDE PREFERRED LOCATION OF BOUNTY COLLECTION. [[Contact on forums if required]]

its always ooc community leader = irp character leader i dont like it