brodz1

Going to give you a bit of input. Firstly, I'd recommend you go over what you've written and fix some grammatical errors, both spelling and punctuation. Next; A bit more information on the guild would be great, as things stand it seems unlikely that people will willingly join it. By "a bit more information" on the guild I mean some more lore/background as to why they were formed. Also, though the idea of them believing in their own god is fine, it may be better if they simply a group that took a different approach to how they follow the Creator (assuming it is a group of humans). And my final bit of input; The server has already seen many guilds that are based off of the "Knights Templar" and we honestly don't need another. Though the idea of the guild is decent, we just don't need another one of these types of guilds. Perhaps change how it operates slighty, keep it close to the original knights if you want, though it may be better if you change and/or add some more things to it. Just my thoughts. -brodz

*Coughs* "Fantasy RP Server." Nobody said physics needs to apply here.

MC Name: brodz1 Character Name: Golo I want my character to be turned into a Dread Knight (Y/N): Indeed. I want to become a part of your group because: I’d like to join this group as I’ve found most Dread Knights bring an interesting aspect to RP when they are involved, whether it be helpful to the situation or not. I myself would like to be able to bring such an experience to others well also enjoying a new way to RP. What can I bring to this group?: Well, I would consider myself a decent RPer, though by no means would I consider myself amongst the top RPers on the server. Regardless, I’d like to bring fun and interesting RP to your group and to others. Can you play nice, and be willing to sit down with someone and explain something politely and cooperatively if something goes wrong, or someone is confused?: But of course, it’s what most people RPing on the server are meant to do when the opposite party is having issues. Time zone: Atlantic Standard Time. I'll just leave this here for now. Feel free to look at it once slots are opened.

*A note is pinned to the application wall* Hello, this note is being writen in regards for a alliance of sorts. I have a fort close to the city of Skravia that you could use as a outpost but in return I wish for myself along with some of your rangers to try and capture Skravia. -signed Kin-

Alright thanks everyone, I will try to make it time based so everyone can be included and also I will try to talk about it with neko like blundermore suggested.

Event Planners, MC Names: Bazza546, brodz1 (More may be added.) Event Date: Hopefully between May 4th to may 6th, if this time passes the event can take place at another time. Event Type: A fun RP battle event that can lead to future events in Skravia and possibly other areas. Players/Nations effected by the event: Skravia and others if the dragon escapes, can be decided by the GMs which are to be attacked. Event Location: Skravia is the main location. Summary: The Collapse: The day was young, the sun beaming down on Skravia and its inhabitants. Three men enter the city, one heading for the church, another for the barracks and the third to the royal district. Suddenly the sky goes into an eerie darkness and lightning strikes the city sending it into chaos, a Dragon forms within the middle of the city and the three robed men can be seen fleeing. The dragon begins to fly towards the skravian docks and destroys the boats. The dragon then heads towards the bridge leading out of Skravia blasting fireballs at the people trying to escape across it plunging them into the water were they can be easily killed. As the dragon hovers over the city a blinding bolt of lightning hits the center of Skravia forming a massive crater that begins to suck the dragon and anything in the area into it... The Aftermath: After this large attack the inhabitants that have survived look into the crater and see an opening with a dark glow coming from within, a few brave soldiers are chosen to go inside along with one of the kings to explore what is causing this light and to see if anyone who was sucked inside has survived. OOC: Three mages enter the city and summon a dragon, the mages and dragon can be played by GMs, after the summoning of the dragon it will ¨Attack¨ the boat leading to the cloud temple disabling any fast travel to the event after the attack. When the men that are chosen to enter the Abyss go down they can be teleported into a separate region or new world rather with the plugin that was used for the verge. People will need to build this world of course so the event would take a short amount of time to set up. Within the abyss they would need to fight the dragon again trying to kill it and save anyone that could have survived the attack. If they kill the dragon then Skravia will be safe but if not the Dragon can escape again and attack the city once more and can yet again be killed or escape to a different location. Other Information: Will need GM assistance with this event as stated within the OOC proportion of the event details.

Name: Kin Rank: I would think I need to start at recruit. Age: Kin is a 284 year old high elf. Other and Previous Jobs: The Lord of Redburrow if you would cant it as a job. Short Bio: Kin lived in Aegis and fought against the undead, the undead battles he fought in were, The Battle were the undead captured Al'Kazar, The battle at crimson vale not many people were at this one and the infection that took Alras. Kin is currently the Lord of Redburrow which is a small village that has a horse route to skravia. Kin wishes to become a guard because he spends alot of his time in skravia and has seen how the guards work. ((This has been more of a descriptive writing of the main points of my characters life, if you would rather me write a multiple descriptive paragraph on the events feel free to ask.)) Current member of (other guilds): None. Previous member of (other guilds): None. Credibility out of ten:I dont want to look like a self centered person so 6 - 8 Loyalty out of ten: 17!! JK, probably 7 - 9

Um... Isnt this technically from skyrim.

*As you’re walking through the woods you come across a small vine covered hut, as you enter the hut you see a book falling apart on a table. Many pages are ripped out but you see the words as if they were still brand new. They read...* In the beginning Aegis erupted into life with moutains smashing from the earth and oceans filling, magma and water cooled forming ores deep in the earth. In this new world all was peaceful until a dark shadow formed in a dark cave. The shadow slowly spread suffocating the land it touched and turning it to dust. Farther away a bright light formed high up in the sky, when this light touched the earth trees sprouted and flowers grew. After hundreds of years the two beings touched and the explosion caused so much force that three different dimensions were born, althogh only one of these dimensions has been discovered by the people of Aegis the other two exist. One of these dimensions eventually harboured Iblees and his Undead followers but in one of the other dimensions came the Aelver, two men apeared in this dimension and created this book oyu read now, althogh this is not the original text listen to these words the original Aelver wrote, a elf and orc will recreate the Aelver and attempt to lead attacks on the undead. The Nether is were the real threat lyes, the people of Aegis must lead a attack at the undeads heart in the Nether... The Aelver will try to find a way into the Nether and a way to survive its taint... The rest of the pages are either faded or ripped out... The time has come... The two have finally been born... They will fight for Aegis... Rules: 1. Never threaten a fellow clan member. 2. If captured take the punishment with honour. 3. Never reveal the location of the palace. 4. If in trouble with money the palace will supply you with a loan but if you leave the clan right after you get the loan we will hunt you down for theft. 5. Treat all with respect and you will be treated the same. 6. Obviously follow server rules. Application: MC name: RP Name: A 3-5 paragraph Bio: Do you accept the rules? We have initiation are you ready to do it; Do you believe you’re good at rp: Have you ever been banned, If yes why: Initiation: The initiation consits of two tests, a test of strength and a test of knowledge. The test of strength will have you be locked out of the palace for three nights, during these nights you will have to hunt mobs and bring back 500 minas with you, dont worry you get to keep the minas but will have to prove you have gotten it legit. The test of knowledge will test you on the lore and rules of the clan so read them a few times please. The two teachings: each one of the two leaders teach there own subject. Thinus is the master preist keeping the religion of the clan alive and also how to heal injured men. Dinok, the one who is destined to destroy the clan from its roots, shall he actually do so with the power he has,or will he save the clan? Dinok the leader of the military group of the palace, he will do whatever it takes to defend the palace and Aegis. *Purpose* The purpose of the Aelver is to protect nature, the reason they do this is because they beleive that as nature dies Aegis slowly dies with it. In order to protect the land the Aelver will attack if threatened or if they see people harming nature. ((will attack with rp of course althogh I will sometimes hire assassins to take out threats, also the other leaders may do this but I am not sure.)) The heart of the Aelver is located far under the palace and is only visited by the preists that feed it a special mixture so the heart can survive. Groupings of the clan: The leaders: Thinus/brodz1, Master preist. Dinok/ War Master. Knights: Those trained by Dinoks vigourous war training and passed the final task: Aprentices: The aprentices of the Knights: Preist: Those who have proven themselves to be loyal to their god and the clan: Scribe: The young men or women being taught by the Prests or if your lucky by Thinus. Judge: Highly important in the clan and must pass the tests of the two leaders. Outcasts: Those who have been banished from the palace by the Judge or one of the two leaders.

I`ve fixed the purpose part of the Aelver as many misunderstood my point so it is now clearer.

EDIT: This post was removed because I was too stupid to realize a question being answered :P

Im not nescesarily saying we will attack oren just pretty much we hate them and possibly will attack the wall. Al_Kazar is broken up into different parts so im gussing the northern wall has its own region and can have war claimed on it.

True I could not beat them but I myself specialize in archery and I think I would have a couple other guilds to help me fight them. Not going to name anyone for rp purposes. Also Im not sure if the other nations of Aegis would help them but with the rumours of the elves and orcs getting ready to attack oren eventually ((I dont know if this is true)) then we could possibly have two whole nations helping us but for there own reasons.

*As you’re walking through the woods you come across a small vine covered hut, as you enter the hut you see a book falling apart on a table. Many pages are ripped out but you see the words as if they were still brand new. They read...* As the world of Aegis began with the oceans being filled and the mountains smashing there way from the earth a beam of light hit a small flower giving it a dome shape, from this new flower came a spore that soon grew into a man. This man could not speak as language had not been made yet but he could think three words, the words were Thinus, Gorath and Dinok. The man wandered the worlds of Aegis for many long years before it attempted to speak the words, after many attempts it could finally mutter Thinus, this was the only word it could say, no matter how much it tried it could not speak the others althogh it knew that the world were important. After another 100 years the man like creature had started to die, it took some reeds and shaved it down into a piece of paper able to be written on, it used plant juices to write the words on the paper. What it wrote next was strange and it didnt know how it knew the words. It wrote, Thinus the one to bring nature back to the world, Gorath the one who shall open the eyes of a lost king, Dinok the one who will shake the palace to its roots... The rest of the pages are either faded or ripped out... The time has come... The three have finally been born... Nature returns... Rules: 1. Never threaten a fellow clan member. 2. Never state your name given to you by the three. 3. If captured take the punishment with honour. 4. Never reveal the location of the palace. 5. If in trouble with money the palace will supply you with a loan but if you leave the clan right after you get the loan we will hunt you down for theft. 6. Treat all with respect and you will be treated the same. 7. Obviously follow server rules. Application: MC name: RP Name: A 3-5 paragraph Bio: If you could prove you are a spore: Do you accept the rules? We have initiation are you ready to do it; Do you believe you’re good at rp: Have you ever been banned, If yes why: Initiation: The initiation consits of two tests, a test of strength and a test of knowledge. The test of strength will have you be locked out of the palace for three nights, during these nights you will have to hunt mobs and bring back 500 minas with you, dont worry you get to keep the minas but will have to prove you have gotten it legit. The test of knowledge will test you on the lore and rules of the clan so read them a few times please. The three teachings: each one of the three leaders teach there own subject. Thinus is the master preist keeping the religion of the clan alive and also how to heal injured men. Gorath is the one that gives lessons of history to the clan new or old members including the other two leaders. Dinok, the one who is destined to destroy the clan from its roots, shall he actually do so with the power he has,or will he save the clan? Dinok the leader of the military group of the palace, he will do whatever it takes to defend the palace and nature. *Purpose* The purpose of the Aelver is to protect nature, the reason they do this is because they beleive that as nature dies Aegis slowly dies with it. In order to protect the land the Aelver will attack if threatened or if they see people harming nature. ((will attack with rp of course althogh I will sometimes hire assassins to take out threats, also the other leaders may do this but I am not sure.)) The heart of the Aelver is located far under the palace and is only visited by the preists that feed it a special mixture so the heart can survive. In case of attack. If under attack from anyone you must flee into the initiation caves. Only Spore Knights may stay and fight along with the battle leader in the three. If there is a recruit in the Initiation then we go deeper into the earth to the Lapis Lazuli storage. Our true forms might be brought out by the mass amount of the gem but we will stay there and wait until we are safe. Groupings of the clan: The leaders: Thinus/brodz1, Master preist. Gorath/ Knowledge Master. Dinok/ War Master. Knights: Those trained by Dinoks vigourous war training and passed the final task: Aprentices: The aprentices of the Knights: Librarian: Those who have passed the tests of Gorath the knowledge master: Student: Those who are being taught by either a Librarian or Gorath: Preist: Those who have proven themselves to be loyal to their god and the clan: Scribe: The young men or women being taught by the Prests or if your lucky by Thinus. Judge: Highly important in the clan and must pass the tests of all three leaders. Outcasts: Those who have been banished from the palace by the Judge or one of the three leaders.

Ok Ive made it so the spore are less of a race and more worship the original spore as there god.