Tom_Whiteman

I really like the climax of this lore. But the problem is I only got to see the climax, when Arayon witnessed this miracle happen to him. I suggest adding a whole plot and expand the history, tell me about Wyrvun, why is Wyrvun choosing this specific person, why does he want to interfere and associate with mortals, let alone give them a unique power? I also suggest expanding on the armor and swords, ice would be heavy if it were across your entire body. Maybe this armor could be extremely heavy and thick, it wouldn't make sense for thick armor to be light. Add more pros and cons, expand on what's allowed and what isn't. Go in-depth with mechanics and explain how they'd relate back to your lore. Very interesting so far though, usually don't write up this much when I'm reading over lore, lol.

Actually, you are mistaken. It is not restricted to Orcish culture. The spirits merely favor the Orcs over other races. Orcs are more honorable then other races, in lore. It would be a better idea if just spirits were praised. It's hard to get aengudaemon lore accepted, and if this is accepted and put as an elemental spirit, it'd be pointless. You'd technically just change the names of four spirits. Would make more sense if a character was to praise a spirit that already has lore than-- well basically the same thing only with Daemon or Aengul stamped on it.

ORCISH SPIRITS MUCH??? (Spirits are basically this. Btw, Ikuras is a greater spirit, just an fyi)

For your information, deity magics cannot be enchanted upon an item. Enchants relate to the void, and void magics, not deity magics! Deity magics may pose the power to BLESS, or CURSE objects, but mere void mages cannot enchant deity magics bound to an item, even if they were to practice the deity magic and/or know how it works.