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Welcome to the Isles of Vailor! Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions in the meantime, feel free to shoot me a message.

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Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Welcome to the Isles of Vailor (again)! Please wait for a GM to implement you.

Welcome to the Isles of Vailor. Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns in the meantime, feel free to shoot me a message.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Welcome to the Isles of Vailor! Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me in the meantime.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Your application has been denied due to plagiarism. Remember that copying something that is not your own work is a serious offence. This is your only warning. If you are found to be plagiarizing again, you will be banned for a certain amount of time. You may re-apply in 24 hours.

You have been denied due to plagiarism of another's application. Copying someone else's work is a serious offense. If you are caught plagiarizing again, you will be banned from applying for a certain amount of time. You may re-apply in 24 hours.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Welcome to the Isles of Vailor! Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns in the meantime, feel free to message me.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Unforntunately, your application is being denied. Please take the time to read the comments bellow and work on your application. You may re-apply in 24 hours. You're metagaming and powergaming definitions are plagiarized. This is against the rules and a serious offence. This is your only warning. If you copy someone else's work again, you will be banned from applying for a certain amount of time. In your bio, you say a human attacked you at the beginning of a sentence then end the sentence saying an orc attacked them. Why would your mom/dad and grandparents know the same exact skills? Such as your mom and grandmother both knowing how to do archery. You mention your cousin at the end of the bio, did he live with you? Why is he important? Who is he? It's cliche to hate an entire race because one happen to hurt your family. German is not a language on LoTC. Why does he hate being touched? You need to include a screenshot. Try downloading gyazo if you cannot figure out how to take a screenshot on your computer. To sum the comments up, plagiarism is a serious offense and therefore you are being denied. I also left a few comments on expanding your biography and working on the details so it makes more sense, so that you have something else to work on while waiting to re-apply as well.

What world edit incident? And it's fine Tahmas ^^ Everyone makes a command mistake at some point. Let's reflect on the past: /nuke x2. snow. the walk of Athera. the walk of Athera take two. The multiple lb mistakes my pretty much every trial ever.

Cool post. Many words. No tl;dr. Really though, we know you posted so you could spread your AMA to more people ;3

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Welcome to the Isles of Vailor. Please wait for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns in the meantime, feel free to shoot me a message.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Unfortunately your application is being denied. You may re-apply in 24 hours. While you are waiting to re-apply, to the time to go through the comments bellow and work on your application some more. These comments are to help guide you so that you may be accepted next time you apply. Metagaming definition is incorrect. Power emoting definition is incorrect. You seem to be looking at powergaming instead of power emoting. You do not indicate your character's age. Your biography is a little short, try including some of these ideas into it: How did your character grow up? Why did everyone think he was weak? Why would he kill people in his village? How did he learn to fight? Did he feel guilt for killing people that would be close to him? How was he banned from his village? Why did he go to Courland? Who were his friends and how did they meet? What does he like to do with his friends? How did he train to become stronger? Why does he want to lead his own village? Personality: Why does he like the dark? How did he come to the realization that he wanted to be an assassin? Did something happen in his life to cause him to be that way? How did he learn to make traps? Also going with personality, what he likes is not really a personality. Try to think of what he acts like. Is he shy? Outgoing? How does he act around other people? Ambitions: Try to talk about why he wants to be a great assassin in your biography. Liking to kill other people is not an ambition, so I'd recommend taking the rest of that information out. It seems like it would fit better in the biography. Knowing how to go invisible and knowing magic/spells is against the rules. If you want to learn magic, you'll need to make a magic application and find a teacher on the server. Weaknesses: try to think of some personality weaknesses, not magic since it's against the rules. Is he scared of something? Try to think of a weakness that cannot be so easily overcome. Examples being: scared of the dark. scared of spiders. inability to talk to other people. Try to expand your character's personality past just wanting to assassinate and kill people. While this can be fun to do, there is more depth to the character than that. Try to think of who he is around his friends and what he's like when he's not trying to kill people. While you have the time, try to work on your spelling and grammar within the application. It makes going through the application easier, as it is hard to read at times. You can do this by putting it into a Google Doc or on Word and the program will highlight spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. Overall, you need to work on your biography, read the server lore on our wiki, and go through the server rules once more. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message on the forums and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

This application is being denied. Parts of your application are still plagiarized. Changing one or two words does not suddenly make the parts not plagiarism. Due to this being your second offense, you will be banned for 3 weeks. You may apply once again on April 21st. Remember that copying someone else's work is a serious offense. During this time try to work on your application and work to understand the parts that you plagiarized so this does not happen again. Once again, you are banned for three weeks and may apply once more April 21st.

You have failed to make the necessary changes and reach out to me within the given amount of time and are being denied. You may re-apply in 12 hours. Take this time to work on your application and go over the critique above. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me.