Unwillingly

@drfate786 sure, shoot, im mostly just interested in the armor anatomy ngl

Your line of action is off, the pose is too flat. You should try practicing with some life drawing. Take a picture of yourself or an animal or look for one online and just draw outlines, this will give you a better grasp on 3d forms and allow you to make your drawings stick out more.

Here's some examples.

http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/1250/2135/1600/LofA.jpg

Here's some figure drawing as well, this is the best method for developing realistic drawing methods.