[Denied][Pending] Whitelist Application

[Zelovely 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? : Zelovely

 

How old are you?:

14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):

 Nope

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

ya

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: 

No metagaming or powergaming, ruins the fun for other players.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

Nah i got ya.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

Planetminecraft 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:

Acting out a fictional character.

 

What is metagaming?: 

Using information gathered during OOC and using it for your advantage when in character.

 

What is powergaming?:

Forcing your actions onto another character.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:

Lessien Rilvenwahl

 

Character’s gender:

Female

 

Character’s race:

Human

 

Character’s age:

22

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

                                                "The Lost Memories of Lessien Rilvenwahl"

    "Last night, i heard mother and father arguing about a young boy who recently moved in to our cracked wooden cabin. I heard father say that he was a son of an old friend. I decided to check on him upstairs in the attic where my mother left him. I tiptoed up the stairs avoiding all the squeaky floorboards. He was sleeping on the floor using a book as his pillow; I sat beside him, watching the young handsome stranger seemed to make my heart flutter. I went back down, to fetch my blanket, and went back up to cover him up. The attic was cold, so I stood up and as I was about to walk, he grabbed my arm. I was so shocked, but he had a joyful smile on his face. "What is your name?" he asked me. "Lessien" I said back to him. As I was about to ask him something my mother and father came, and introduced me to him. "This is Daryl" my father told me. "He will be staying with us for quite a while." I nodded accepting the fact that he was going to stay with us. 5 years later Daryl and Lessien soon became best friends. Until one night, he told her why he was here. "My family was killed a week before i moved in with you. Your father was the only man I could find."An awkward silence came between them. "But Lessien....I think its time for me to leave." His words made my heart faint, a sadness came in me. "But. Why?" I asked. "I'm going to join the military, and I'll be gone for a while." he answered. The next moring, me and my parents both said are farewells. Daryl gave me a kiss on my forehead, and left. I hadn't said a word that day.
   2 years later, my father was killed by a group of bandits, and my mother grew colder. She gave up on life, and she also gave up on me. I was soon alone and when I left my wrecked home, I was so depressed. My memory all seemed to go away. I forgot everything, including my best friend. Til one day, I got back to my senses, I didn't know where I was or what I was doing, but I remembered that someone told me "If you can't remember something, it means that it wasn't important." I accepted the fact that I will never get my memories back; so I started a new life, and left all my memories behind.

THE END.

Personality Traits:

Quiet, Kind, elegant. But she is also sometimes greedy, and sarcastic.

 

Ambitions:

To find a place to settle, and call home.

 

Strengths/Talents:

Unknown yet.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Afraid of traveling, and entering the wilderness. No one knows whats lurking out there.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Long straight blond hair, 5'6, and 140 pounds.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide 

http://imgur.com/C91gCvx

 

[Readicti 902]

• Expand on your roleplay and powergaming definitions.
• Your biography lacks server lore and it's not realistic that your character would just lose their memory. It's also frowned upon because losing your memory negates the entire history you gave them.
• Expand on her personality.

 

Denied. And I forgot to do this a day ago- so they completed the 24 hours rule.

[Readicti 902]

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