[Denied] Tyfighter's Application

[TyFighterEpic 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!



What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TyFighterEpic

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: War Rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand the basics, and will find answers on the forum or from players if needed.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?
I was looking for a good medieval server when I found role play servers. I was interested and went on the server to find out more about it. I talked with a few people on there and did some exploring then began reading the rules and wiki and fell in love with the concept.


Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!



What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of behaving like a character from a book and acting out the parts.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is acting as if you are psychic and know all things even if your character doesn't.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is basically behaving invincible and always turning the odds in your favor instead of playing along with the story in a relistic fashion.



In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.



Character’s name: Elijah Everest

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age:
20
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Elijah Everest is a smart fellow who enjoys learning and is a skilled archer. He is good with a sword but more powerful with a bow. He lived a simple life, but loved hearing stories about brave heroes and courages kings. He strives to become a hero by becoming more skilled in other arts and in history, but that day is not near. His father was a ghast hunter, which is a dangerous profession. His mother, was a gardener. As a young boy, he would help his father on the hunts. He learned the skill of archery on these trips, and he made friends with the zombie pigman. He went on these trips until he was 17, when a terrible tragedy accrued. While traversing the nether in search of ghast a blaze under the influence of a deamon came and opened fire, hitting his father and killing him. Elijah killed the blaze but the deamon escaped just in time.


Filled with grief of the loss of his father, he made his way back to the overworld. He determined to get revenge on the deamon that killed his father and Iblees for sending his minion to do the job, a journey that made him leave home and go and become more powerful to get his revenge. He join the army and worked his way up in the ranks, to the point where he became one of the best archers in the kingdom of Oren. The king named him Rangieal for his skills, and made him a captain. He fought in battles, and was loved by all the kingdom. He was 19 at the time, making him the youngest captain in the kingdom. Because of his talents and skills, Ibless sent a deamon to capture his mother, and held her hostiage in the nether. When he found out, he immedently set out to free her. It took 6 months trekking through the nether to find where she was being kept. Filled with rage, he went ballistic and killed all of the creatures in the fortress, when he found his mother, he freed her and returned home with her. After making sure she was recovering well, he began his trek back to the king, but on the way the deamon that killed his father stopped him and challenged him to a duel. He accepted. When the battle began, he fought with a veracity that was uncanny for a human. After many hours of non-stop fighting, Elijah hit a fatal blow on the deamon, killing him. And now where will the story go? We shall see...

Personality Traits:
Optimistic, encouraging, quick temper, kind
Ambitions:
To kill Iblees
Strengths/Talents:Bow and arrow, being a leader

Weaknesses/Inabilities: staying focused in boring situations, remembering small details, terrified of spiders, not a fan of heights

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): slim, tall, strong, 6ft tall

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):
 

[mitto 2312]

Your application has been [DENIED] this is because there were too many problems with this application, or just one or two big problems that I could not look past. Do not be scared however, you can still apply again, just hopefully after you have made the changes I have laid out.

 

(1)

Your biography is riddled with small lore errors, think less about minecraft lore and more about Lord of the Craft lore.

 

Just like Game of Thrones of Skyrim, Lord of the Craft has its own lore, setting and history. In order to show you understand the universe that we're currently set in you will have to include some lore in your biography.

 

Check out out wiki:

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

(2)

Your biography includes too many OP events, things that would only be acceptable happening in game.

 

Joining the military and getting awarded etc is not allowed.

 

There have been any recordings of Iblees coming down to the mortal plane to hit someone into fire.

 

(3)

Please provide an appropriate skin for your character. Here's a small guide:

 

1. Go to: http://minecraft.novaskin.me/#
2. On the far left of the screen there's a button that says 'Open' Click that and select your characters skin.
3. Once you've successfully opened your characters skin on the top bar there should be a similar green button that says 'Photo'
4. Hit photo and it should show you a 3D model of your skin. Once it's come up and you're happy save the image of the skin to your computer.
5. Next, go to; http://imgur.com/ trusted image sharing site.
6. On the top hit the 'Upload Images', then hit browse computer and select the 3D model of your skin that you saved.
7. Once you've successfully loaded the image, hit 'Start Upload' and after a bit it should send you to a page with that image.
8. Simple copy the URL link and put it on the application.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.