[Denied]Application, Timezune, 3Rd Attempt

[TimeZune 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  TimeZune

How old are you?: - 14 soon 15

What time-zone do you live in?: - UTC+1:00 Central Europé

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - In other minecraft servers like Fairy Tail and Naruto. And on other games.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Yes i've been on the Naruto and Fairy Tail server.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Yes i have this is my 3rd attempthttp://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/105290-application-timezune-2nd-attempt/

 

How did you hear about us?: - I search at google on a minecraft MMORPG server and this was the first and best hit.

What do you think the server will be like? - It will be a massive RPG server where everyone will truly live up to their roleplaying character. It may even be real wars or conflicts between different races!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - The other time i missread one rule so i got denied but now i read all rules again and understand them.

 

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - I like that both need to agree if they going to fight and that you most roleplay the leading up to the fight.

And i also like the rule where you must wear a skin that looks like you're hero so you doesn't have a skin on a human when you are a orc.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: - Simple described,  Roleplaying is when you create a person there you can choose Everything about him and Everything he does, You "pretend" to be him in games and talk and acts the way that you want him to act in the game.

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is when a player uses information or gained outside of the game, to gain an unfair advantage over other players.

 

What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is when you make you're own character overpowered to other like if you're in fight with someone in the game you say like this. "Using a aura that makes all of you're attack useless on me" Its unfair and can not be countered.

 

In-Character Information   

 

What’s your character called?: - Amazonos

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Kharajyr

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 24 normal years.

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family

Amazonos lived on a Island called Va'Khajra, With his Patta – Father and his Munna – Mother, at the age of 5 he was very kittish and curious about the Island he lived on,  but he did not know what was waiting for him when he turned fifteen.

Years Went and he grew up to a cub, he could stand on 2 legs but it was hard for him, every once in a while he had to drop to all four. He helped his Patta and Munna alot with different works, Amazonos turned to the age of fifteen and he has to go through Trials of Metztli, If he fails he will lose all of his honour and get banished from the mainland, or if they fail the final trial he will be slain. He needs to do 4 trials each given from one of the four Aelkos. The first Trial, The Trial of Crafting, Amazonos needs to learn the economy of the Kharajyrs. So they send him with nothing but his own belongins in to the jungle. His task was to create something valuable. Amazonos created a wonderfull bow that the Aelkos accepted. Amazonos passed the first trial no he had 3 left. The second trial was given by the Aelkos of Culture, He's task was to study the flora and fauna and do something of use with it. Amazonos tamed a wild bat that he had found in the jungle, The aelkos of Culture got impressed and let him pass. Now i had to do the third trial. Amazonos spoke to the Aelkos of War and asked what the task was. Amazonos would get banished from kharajyr society for one elven day. and his task was to hunt down a impressive beast of the mainland. Amazonos found a Jaguar and slayed it with his sword. Amazonos brought back the beast to Aelkos of war and he got impressed. Amazonos passed and now he only has the final trial left. The Trial of faith. The Aelkos of religion brought Amazonos to the Temple of Metztli, to look upon the moon pool. Amazonos are given the sacrificial dagger. His task was to plunge it into their own chest. if they do it successfully the Aelkos will heal their wounds. Amazonos Plunged the dagger in his own chest, he felt pain but the pain goes slowly away as the Aelkos heals him, The aelkos asked what he had learned from the Trial. He passed the final Trial, Amazonos is now a full-fledged adult.

 

What are their ambitions?: - Amazonos wants to become a good hunter so he can help out his family. to gather them food and sell the things he hunted for Money so he can support his family.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - Amazonos got the Power of the eagle. he can See everthing from far away, He can hear Everything from far away. He can smell Everything from far away.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - If you hurt his family in someway Amazonos will get destroyed depressed and weak. and he will lose all his special Power. and cant do much at all.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - About his lore im sorry if its lack in good grammar. And if you see something small that is wrong that get my denied please tell me to change it instead of insta deny thank you,

 

 Give us a description of how they look ?: - He got Fairly dark sand skin and green Eyes he got no shirt (topless) He got dark green pants and a dark grey helmet on his head. he got big mouth and a big nose. (sorry for not so detailed but i give you a screenshot)

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: http://i.imgur.com/KwdQcqK.png

 Tell me if this isn't how they look like if not i change so dont deny for that thx.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied and you are warned for plagiarism.

 

Evidence: Metagaming definition directly copied from this application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/105180-angrypuffers-elf-application/

 

Other reasons for denial:

 

- Your biography is honestly so poorly formatted that I can barely read it. Please take more time and care making sure your application is comprehensible.

 

- Your biography is literally telling the story of almost every Kharajyr rather than telling us any actual events that occurred to your character to make him unique. Talk less about the trials that effectively every Kharajyr must go through and instead focus more on compelling events that happened specifically to your character.

 

- Your character's strengths are much too overpowered. Though greater than average perception is a common strength for Kharajyr, being able to see, hear and smell from extreme distances is quite unfair and could be easily abused.

 

- Your weakness makes no sense. Though it works in conjunction with your strengths, you haven't actually explained why he suddenly loses his powers because he is upset. You should completely change your strengths and weaknesses anyway, as your strengths are over-powered.

 

- Your entire application has poor grammar and spelling. If you have trouble with English then it is forgivable, but I'd like you to try and spend more time making sure it is as good as possible.

 

 

Plagiarism is a very serious offense on The Lord of the Craft and is not taken lightly. If you are found to be plagiarising again, you will be banned from applying for 1 week, and any further incidents of plagiarism thereafter will result in a significantly worse punishment. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, you may message/PM me.

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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