[Denied]Jack1269 Applacation

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - jack1269

How old are you?: - 16

What time-zone do you live in?: - EU





Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes in an mmo

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - no but in an mmo

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no





How did you hear about us?: -youtube

What do you think the server will be like? - fun and a good roleplay experience

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - powergaming is not allowed





Definitions



This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!



What is roleplaying?: - roleplaying is where you play as another person with a different personality and live there life

What’s metagaming?: - metagaming is where your'e character does something or say something when they would have no idea to do it or talk about it.



What’s powergaming?: - powergaming is where your'e character does actions where that would be impossible 



In-Character Information



Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.



What’s your character called?: - Mullan Blacstone



What race are they (and sub-race)?: - elves wood elves



What sex are they?: - male



How old are they?: - 230



Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Mullan was an only child in his family.his family home was built on a tree and was close to an human village.a an young child he has wanted to learn magic like in the story's his mother used to read to him.one day hunting rabbits he was attacked by a bear the bear got him off guard and he was hit by a near fatal blow.he then wake's up in a bed .relieved to be alive he set's out on an journey to learn magic and go on an adventure

What are they like (personality)?: - kind and friendly but will attack when provoked



What are their ambitions?: - to learn magic  and go on an adventure



Do they have any special skills?: - he is good with a bow cause of being trained to hunt



What are their weaknesses?: - cause of the blow from the bear he cant run well



Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - dirty blonde hair and blue eyes short and skinny



Anything else you want to say about them?: - nope

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-All your definitions are very vague, try and expand upon them. Maybe use an example?

-Your entire application is filled with typos and errors.

-Your biography is much too short.

-Your biography includes no server lore.

-Your biography is highly incoherent, and makes no sense.

-Your "Personality" is kind of an oxymoron... Being provoked is being made to attack... So its a special note that he will attack when he's provoked?

-You need to expand on your character's strengths and personality.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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