[Denied]Server Application For Slgla

[skipperme 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - slgla  
 
How old are you?: - 14
 
What time-zone do you live in?: -GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)
 
Have you ever role-played before - if you have, how?: - No, I have not roleplayed before, but the whole concept of playing as someone else excites me.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No I haven’t
 
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - ---
 
How did you hear about us?: - My brother IRL, KingJeepers, is a regular player on the server and has told me about events and what goes on on the server
 
What do you think the server will be like? – adventure and action, I am hoping that people will abide by the rules of roleplaying and I am hoping there will be some intense battles to enjoy and take part in.
 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes I have, and yes I agree to them.
 
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - I like how Minimaps are allowed to be used by players, it makes the game feel more like a RPG, which is kind of what I’m looking for in this server.
 
What is roleplaying?: - When you assume the role of a charachter
 
What’s metagaming?: - When someone who is roleplaying stops being their character for some reason
 
What’s powergaming?: - To roleplay and do something that you could not do in real life. E.G. Smash up someones car by crashing it at full speed, then drive of unharmed
 
 
 
Brief Description of Character
 
 
 
What’s your character called?: - Hemror Fal'rd
 
What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human (Southeron)
 
What sex are they?: - Male.
 
How old are they?: - 29
 
Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - At birth Hemror was abandoned in a forest on the outskirts of Leaneial. He was raised by wolves and from a very early age he learnt to kill and hunt. After many years of living with the wolves he left the forest in search of a job. He began to journey to a well known town named Abresi, on his journey he was ambushed by many bandits, each one he killed with a bite to the neck. Hemror took what valuables he could find from the bandits, and when he finally reached Abresi he sold them. Only keeping some armor and his dagger - Shadowlight. He stayed in Abresi for many years, got married and has two children. Then, one day, his house was burned down mysteriously, now he spends his days searching for the person responsible for the death of his wife and children.
 
What are they like (personality)?: - Hemror, is and isolated but powerful person, because he was raised by wolves for the majority of his life he never has time to socialise. Due to this he lives mostly in forests and mountains and never really talks to other races.
 
What are their ambitions?: - To find the person responsible for his families death
 
Do they have any special skills?: - Because Hemror was raised by wolves he was taught how to attack using his teeth, this means that he kill a man with a single bite to the neck. He is also a fast runner.
 
What are their weaknesses?: - Anything that reminds Hemror of his family can send in into a state of shock, from which he will often not come out of for days.
 
Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He has very large muscles which almost bulge out of this clothes, shaggy brown hair and dark, piercing blue eyes. He wears a ripped tunic and trousers with various bits of odd armor attached to him. 
 
Anything else you want to say about them?: - Hemror has dreams of one day building and empire.
 
 
Screenshot of skin: http://imgur.com/uMhLwMh (link to screenshot)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-You need to expand upon your roleplaying definition.

-Your meta-gaming and powergaming definitions arnt wrong - but they arnt right. Try and define them if you can.

-Your biography is too short.

-Your biography literally makes no sense. ((Why and how would someone raised by wolves get clothes - understand the concept of jobs - and moreso be able to kill armored bandits with his teeth...?))

-Apparently - your character's ambitions is to find whomever killed his parents...but you make no mention of his parents - or them even being dead in his biography.

-Hemror's skill of being able to bite someone and kill them with one bite to the neck is far fetched - and just about impossible.

-You again make no mention about Hemror's family...so how could he go into shock about his estranged and seemingly non-existant family?

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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