[Denied]Firegirl's Whitelist Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: firegirl7892467

 

How old are you?: 16 years old

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): I think I maybe have, but I cannot find the application.

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes 

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Roleplay Rules

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope!

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Google.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of well....acting like somebody else.

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using OOC information to help your character out in RP.

 

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is for example, not dying, insta-healing all wounds.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Jo'Zavi

 

Character’s gender: Female

 

Character’s race: Kharajyr, or Kha'Leparda

 

Character’s age:  10

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

 Jo'Zavi was was born in the times of Anthosian Kharajyr, relativly new to the lands. When Jo'Zavi was just a kitten, she was taken by a group of passing slavers and sold into slavery. There Jo'Zavi worked until she was six-ten, when passing monks freed Jo'Zavi from her chains.  Jo'Zavi went to live with the monks for awhile, learning how to defend herself with basic combat moves, hunt, and survive in the wilderness. The monks there also taught her how to read and write in simple words, and they cared for Jo'Zavi like her parents could never have. Jo'Zavi however, grew up with a passion for learning about Muuna. Jo'Zavi often read books, wrote, and talked with the other monks about Muuna. Knowing that she could never climb to the ranks of Priestess, Jo'Zavi instead poared her time into learning about her culture's history. When Jo'Zavi however, found about the Trials of Metztli, she was scared. Those trials sounded difficult, and she knew she would almost never be perpared for them. For a long time she was scared. She started secluding herself from her fellow monks, and noticing this, the monks asked her what was wrong. Brusting into tears, Jo'Zavi confessed she was scared of the Trials of Metztli, and that she thought she would never be fully prepared for them. The monks, smiling, told her to keep her head down in the future when she reaches 15, and to stay low and not answer any personal questions. Finally getting restless, Jo'Zavi asked the monks if she could explore on her own. After another series of trials, Jo'Zavi was granted premission by the monk leader to leave. 

 

 

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Shy, quick, nimble, humble, kind, caring, loving.

 

Ambitions: Stay alive.

 

Strengths/Talents: Quick and nimble, Jo'Zavi often loves to run and explore. She is seen as playfully, even now when she is a cub. She's shy, and quick to run away when in danger. Her greatest weapon is being cute.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She is weaker than most able bodied humans. Having almost no knowledge in combat, but only armed with teeth and claws, she's more likely to run away from a fight than start one.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 

 

A light brown, almost golden colored fur, some dark spots on the skin, green eyes.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

-Your powergaming and meta-gaming definitions still need to be expanded upon.

 

-You character's biography is still very confusing. If she was from Anthos - where'd she live in the Thales, Fringe, and Athera?

 

-You cannot apply as a character below the age of 10.

 

-Your character's biography is inconsistent... how can she be ten if she was free'd by non-descrip monks at 16?

 

-Quick and Nimble are not personality traits.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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