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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SlyChung

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You need to use a roleplay-friendly skin! This means a skin that illustrates your character’s appearance. Also, you must not use a skin that is obscene, offensive or not related to RP, such as a Batman skin.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): When you die, either in roleplay or minecraft, you simply go back to the Cloud Temple and forget all memory of your death and the roleplay leading up to it.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From my two friends Caseyseal and Mylittlep0ny.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: In which two or more people/characters act in a scene or story deciding their own fate within their actions.

What is metagaming?: Gathering information such as names and age and allowing your character to then use and speak about the information they gathered from OOC.

What is powergaming?: In which the character/player forces an action. Example~ “She would stab him in the heart and kill him”

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:  Maria Cousland

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Wood elf

Character’s age: 224

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When Maria when was born her family was rich and had many fun times they lived on an island called Kalos, when Maria grew up to the age of 80 she would start playing out seeing the outside world more fun than the inside of her house, She always played around with two of her friends named Drake and Arradon on which the two were brothers, She always loved Drake but she was always too shy to ask him out so instead  she would always play the simple tag and hide and seek games. Then one day while she was playing a game with her friends, She got lost in the dark cave which she could barely see in forgetting which way she entered while she was hiding, She was lost for a couple of days until her father found her while she was crying under a tree.  Then the next day her father took her out to do hunting to cheer her up after she got lost. She would start training with a small oak bow with a weak string that would easily break but Maria was so light weight at the time it did not even matter at the time. Her father always took care of her till the age of 150 and her father went missing. She cried just like her mother did too. Drake always tried to see what was wrong but the mother always pushed Drake away telling her to stay away from her not realising that Drake was Maria’s friend due to how sad she was at the time. A couple of years after the disappearance of her father she sneaked down into her basement to see which of what looked like her father’s bow, She smiled as it reminded her of him so she took the bow and ran outside helping and training herself to the ways of archery and on how to use the dark forest to which help her make her way to survive. When she reached 160 she would bring food and supplies to her mother and herself as she was the only child of the Cousland family.

 

10 years later she heard that Drake was going and she nearly cried cause she did not want to lose another person she loved and cared about so she asked him out knowing this was her only chance of seeing him unless she did what she did. Drake accepted and she smiled and Drake brought her to a field full of flowers which she always loved so for the next couple of months  Drake always brought her to the same flower  until everyone was forced to get on a boat and was transported to The Fringe  then to Thales untill she reached Anthos where the rest of her story’s begin.

 

Personality Traits: She is very shy to all people making her near silent to strangers and sometimes even her friends, She likes to have her own way and if she don’t she would get mardy and storm off.

 

Ambitions: She would mostly spend her time hunting in the wild with her bow, She personally hunts with her own bow and does not like using other people’s bows while hunting.

 

Strengths/Talents: She is much quicker on foot and is able to pull the string of her bow back quicker due to her years of training and hunting animals in the wild.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She does not like the darkness at all and if the room or place she is in is dark without any lights then she starts to panic and worry about near everything. As she is very light weight her legs are her weakness, When someone kicks or hits the back of her legs she is most likely to fall down as the legs don’t support her as much as it does for normal people.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Maria would be tanned and her hair is a light shade of dirty blonde and she has long hair going down the back and she weighs 70k and being taller than most wood elf’s nearly catching up to the size of an average human she is at the size of 5’7.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/ZI0S9j2

 

And yes Drake and Arradon are real players/people, Drake Rif is played by Caseyseal and Arradon Rif is played by Mylittlep0ny.

And thank you for commenting on how nice my skin is.

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I've sent you a PM about the rule you are confused about.

 

Please expand on your powergaming definition, maybe give an example?

 

Elves are physically adults at the typical human age, ~20's or so. But culturally they are not considered adults untill they are 50 years old. But before this they can still start learning how to use a weapon and the like.

 

You have her father disapeering- but why? Is this 'Drake' and 'Arradon' actual people on the server?

 

Your worlds are wrong- Kalos came quite a bit before Anthos and I belive everyone was forced to move into Anthos. We are currently in Athera- meaning your biography skipped over the worlds of The Fringe and Thales.

 

You say she is shy and yet she enjoys bossing people around- this seems rather contradictory. Also she seems very selfish by this description of her personality, but in her biography she seemed the opposite.

Try to make your personality and biography fit together more.

 

Your- Wow. Your ambition floored me. There is nothing about her being greedy in her biography, The only thing that makes sense is that she apparently came from a rich family, but then why would she steal from her friends- a very cruel thing to do from someone who seems so sweet.

 

Your strength is very odd and doesnt make sense. Strengths are like skills with a bow, or good at climbing- make sure these relate back to your biography.

 

Your weaknesses- Why? Why does this happen? Did she have a bad expirience? Why is she scared of the dark?

 

Could you include an actual height? Aswell- Your skin is very pretty! It is really nice.

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