[Denied]Whitelisting Application For Aladd04/ezzorath

[Ezzorath 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: aladd04

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Global Rules - Hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, they are all clearly stated.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends talked of it a year or two back when I was on their Roleplay server. That server went down last summer, and I've missed Roleplay Minecraft since.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Acting out a role you wish to be.

What is metagaming?: Using out of character context to insight or promote benefits in-character.

What is powergaming?: Using overpowered aspects in roleplay.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name : Ezzorath 

Character’s gender : Male

Character’s race : Wood Elf

Character’s age : 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

My name is Ezzorath. Son of Azzorath, a guard to the State of Laureh'lin, and Izeliarath, a housewife. My family was never noble, and it may never rise to be. But our position to make a difference in these lands change nonetheless. When I was fifteen, my father died in combat against High Elven scum, in that six year war I saw him change, and I regret not falling with him on that day. I was forced to supply for my family, my mother grew insane. We lived in a small hut in the trees, easy to reach for anyone trained to climb. Large leaves draped over a straw and stem roof, with jungle-wood planks making the walls in pentagonal shape. It fit our small family fine, as me and my brother were out most days to begin with. My father taught me how to hunt with a bow since I was young, and setting snares and other traps brought easy food with such abundant life in the forests. Hunting became game for my next three years after my fathers death. It kept my mind off my father, but altogether I was still with him in those forests. Me and my brother became extremely skilled archers, and this would prove useful for years to come.

 

When I was eighteen, I met what I believed was the love of my life. Her name was Amelia, but highelven unalike me. After two years of a happy relationship, Her father revealed his hate for me, and wanted to rid my love with her through force. At this point, I have grown to the age of twenty. My father died five years ago, and I had spent years suffering from the loss of him. Her father, a man by the name of Brutus, a strong highelven warrior, killed my mother and attempted to kill me in cold blood. I remember the night clearly, I was on my cotton bed still awake, but not prepared. Brutus crushed our crooked thin plank door in half with his axe, and charged into my home. Our one room home was exposed, all three of us could have died. He decapited my mother, then turned to my brother. I through a dagger underneath my bed at Brutus and it pierced his lower back, he turned quickly to return a strike but was clearly in pain. Brutus swung his axe at me  horizontally offering me a chance to duck, and I rolled to the other side of the pentagonal room to where my sword lie leaning against the wall. I wield it quickly, but to late. Brutus begins to swing his axe directly upon my young fourteen year old brother Graev's head. Graev reacts quickly, with a true warrior speaking from within him. He grabs the metal candle holder to his left and parries the axe as it strikes toward him, kicking Brutus in the knee so hard it crushes his knee cap. Brutus swings again at Graev, and my brother is slightly cut on his cheek. Graev responds by taking a chair and smashing it across Brutus' head. The Highelf screams in pain, and I thrust my sword into his throat, piercing it cleanly to the other side. I kick his ragdoll body with my foot, and blood sprays from his neck. My mother is dead.

 

When the State of Laureh'lin reinstated the new capital of Leyulin me and my brother set off for the new life waiting for us within those walls. We headed toward the city and established our own ways of making money, stealing, hunting, and looting what we can as we found it. We sold pelts to get armor, stole from caravan carts and stalls to eat and wear new clothing. We wish to find ourselves a less crime-ridden life, but have yet to discover it.

 

Personality Traits: Leader, Brave, Intelligent.

 

Ambitions : Become Assassins or serve the State of Laureh'lin.

 

Strengths/Talents : Marksmanship, Leadership, Intelligence

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities : Easily flattered, quickly distracted by females

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

 

Ezzorath stands a Tall 6'2, and carries a weight of 178 Pounds. Ezzorath's eyes are as green as the jungle leaves, His skin a cocoa-caramel brown that compliments his eyes. His dark brown hair falls long off his head in a, and he carries a muscular build.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://gyazo.com/9bf4b84230e572d11c94024bbd76e524

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your metagaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography contains villainous actions.

 

-Your characters biography is written in first-person present tense, making extremely hard to read and understand.

 

-You need to expand on your character's skills and weaknesses. Any physical problems? Any work related skills?

 

-Wood elves have much darker skin than as depicted in your minecraft skin (yet oddly fitting with your character's description, which appears to have gotten it right.)

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM f you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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