[Denied]Application Of Awesome89078 (Playing As Bedic Deathmar)

[Knightlevent 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: awesome89078.

How old are you?: 14.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the application, because it makes the server have such a great atmosphere ,and not have the trolls.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I saw it on this video on youtube! 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: It is performing a role in act of a game, or not real life. It is pretending to be a character to get a certain atmosphere which is not usually felt in your everyday life.

What is metagaming?:  Using OOC info in roleplaying.

What is power gaming?: Power gaming is attacking somebody, without giving them time to respond. 

In-Character Information 

Character’s name: Bedic Deathmar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elves

Character’s age: 18

Biography: Bedic Deathmar is an young elven explorer. He lost his way and was trapped in a desert for 5 years of his life! He finally found his way back to his home, and it ready to see how things have changed, he used to have a wife and 5 kids! He soon lost them and all his belongings, sadly he has gotten over them, but they will never be forgotten. He soon will venture again making quest of his own to soon tell his great tales again!

  Bedic's dad was a hard working man, he was a elven military commander, always away from home. This gave Bedic the power to do as he please, he went on adventures, and played with friends. But once his dad got home all fun was lost, and the talks of war arouse. He soon went on a adventure but never came back,  and was lost for 5 years, now that he is back, he is ready to start a new life, a better one....

Personality Traits: Determined, well-mannered, excellent at warfare, friendly, talkative, and easy to get along with.

Ambitions: He wants to soon explore again, and meet new faces.

Strengths/Talents: Archery, melle skills, farming, cooking, and stamina

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Swimming, and hand-to-hand combat.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 ft 11, 190 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Overland 349]

Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made. Feel free to private message me with any questions.

• Please expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.
• While not an error, Elves under the age of 50 are usually considered children.
• Your biography is a bit short and lacks server lore; the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need. I also request that you expand on why he was trapped in a desert and such.
• Please balance your strengths and weaknesses and expand on your appearence.

[Overland 349]

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