[✔] [Accepted] [Pending]Christiand96's Application

[ChristianD96 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ChristianD96

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Once a while back

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes and yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Honestly, theres no rule I disagree with.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope, I understand

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A while back through a youtube video and PMC.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Role-playing is when you create a character in which you take that character on a journey or adventure if you will and make choices that affect you and other peoples characters in game.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you take information given to you out of character and bring it into in-character situations

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you give your character unrealistic god-like abilities to use against others

 

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Orlaf Doomforge

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 84

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

        Orlaf Doomforge, a stubborn but wise Dwarf that is a blacksmith and fighter on the battlefield. Orlaf grew up in the Doomforge clan which is well known for their fire like looking hair and beards and pointy elven like ears. Orlaf who is a skilled and fierce fighter fought for the clan long ago in a long and tiresome battle. It all started when a large band of bandits came in and pillaged the clan's city. It was obvious who it was because everywhere the band pillaged, they always left a marking at the entrances to state that they were there and got away with what they did. However, Orlaf wouldn't let this go unfinished. After a few months of preparations and proper forging, Orlaf forged each and ever clan mate with sets of armor and weapons to fight with when the Clan would enter into battle. However, when the King and council of the clan found out about this ambition to take back what was rightfully theirs, they shut it down because they had bigger plans for the Doomforge Clan. Orlaf didn't see eye to eye with his King and council so he had to secretly plan out the attack with only about 10 clan mates. After a long 2 nights at the tavern, drinking and planning the attack, Orlaf and his band of Doomforge clan members snuck out of  the city unnoticed and made way to the Bandits village. Once they arrived, they tried to sneak through the village gates without being noticed but just failed when a sleeping guard was awoken by the sound of the Doomforge's armor. The Guard then raised an alarm to the whole village and the band of Doomforge clan mates had to change up their whole plan of attack. It turned into a very bloody and gruesome fight, as swords and axes could be seen clashing together all over and arrows falling from the sky. Though the fight was not easy, the band of clan members from the Doomforge clan had claimed victory and had taken what was taken from them back to their city. When the band of Dwarves returned to the city, they went to the tavern and drank the night away. However, Orlaf was woken up to a full pitcher of cold water hitting on his face. When he woke up and saw who poured it, he stood straight up and greeted the King of the Doomforge clan. The King and council had somehow found out about their little mission and each and every one of the Dwarves who left for this repo mission were thrown in the cities prison for a couple years.

-2 years had passed and Each Dwarf was released, and this is where Orlaf's  journey begins again.

 

Personality Traits: Stubborn, Friendly, Wise, Understanding

Ambitions: To become a better well known blacksmith and fighter on the battlefield

Strengths/Talents: Loyal, Fierce in battle, Can forge weapons and armor's like it can be done in his sleep, well disciplined

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Stubborn, rule breaker sometimes when he thinks what he's doing is the right thing, bit of a drunk/alcoholic

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long pointy elf like ears with fiery like set of hair and long beard.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/dwarven-blacksmith-3092586/

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Your Application is 

- The Clan FireHammer is not a Dwarven Clan in Lore, please pick another Clan, they can be found here... http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves 

- You need to change your Lore about your family being leaders of the Clan due to it not existing.

- Change his ambitions as well, due to the Clan not existing, possibly make his ambition to become a well know blacksmith(ex.)

-Please add more lore to the application; ie (Places, Kings, Events, Etc..)

- Add more weaknesses to balance out your strength's 

- Your skin is already in use and was made by another player on the server (darkjames)

- Edit his appearance part to make him seem more like a human and less like a man covered in lava

- Also, please find a new skin and link it 

 

You have 24 hours to edit your application. Failure to make the needed changes within 24 hours will result in the denial of your application.

 

Please send me a PM over the forums once you've made the needed changes.

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Your Application is....

 

Welcome to the Server!

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