[Denied] Harvster2004's App For The Server

[harvster2004 9]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:harvster2004

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes i am

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes i have it was denied Link: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/124971-harvster2004s-app-for-the-server

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No GM item refunds

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): i am sure of all rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i saw it through social media and i looked into it more and wanted to be here.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you take the role of a character that you or another person has made for you to act out and pretend to be that person and have there personal traits

What is metagaming?: Meta gaming is when you say someones name but your character doesnt know that persons name for example ("hi Frank'')when youre character doesnt know Any Franks

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is a form of godmode and it means you or someone else is doing something that would be impossible to do in that place or time.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Drako Blackchain

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 53

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Drako was born in Malinor and his family were very kind to him he had a mother and a farther and a Young Sister He lived a fairly peacful life until one day his farther went out to go collect some logs of wood when he never came back. Drako was devistated so he went out to hunt for him on his own he then got lost in the woods near Malinor as he tried to get back home he managed to get out the forest but the problem was he was in the wrong area he was in Ker'nor.

 

He managed to collect some money and shelter under trees ever time it was raining then one day he saw a elder Dark Elf Using magic he asked him what it was and how to learn it all the Elder Dark Elf said was here were many magic teachers around Athera so Drako went on a journey to find a magic teacher and he swears by the end of his life he will have learnt magic.

Personality Traits: Drako is funny yet quite smart,he also very artistic and imaginative

Ambitions: he wishes to learn magic even if it costs him a arm and a leg also he wishes to join a Dark Elven Guild to make friends and be more social with his life

Strengths/Talents: Drako can run A bit faster than normal he is also very bendy and athletic

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Drako Is afraid of spiders so much he might even freeze he is also afraid of any reptile such as snakes but he isnt really that afraid but still is scared from them he also he isnt a very good marksmen he shudders alot because of being left in the cold for many months.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Weight: 102 lbs

Height: 5'15''

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imageshack.com/a/img537/5030/EpSjWN.png

[Lita 677]

Not bad, but still a bit of work to do. For one, your powergaming definition could still use a little work. If you're confused, have a peek at previously accepted applications and see how they put it, but make sure not to directly copy it!

 

Second, your bio is a little hectic. Malinor hasn't been around in a while, and the only other server thing you mention is Ker'nor. Maybe a little bit more? Try reading through the racial wikipedia pages!

 

I presume by 5'15" you mean 6'3", which, at 102 pounds, is... extremely unhealthy. Probably dead. I'd advise morphing that a little bit, please.

 

Overall, it could use a bit of improvement in grammar and spelling. 

 

Thanks for your patience! I presume Jade has already messaged you offering her help, but if not, don't feel hesitant to send me a PM if you like. I'm more than willing to assist. Cheers!

Edited April 8, 2015 by Lita
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[Lita 677]

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