[Denied] Koikoibuddy9's Application

[koikoibuddy9 0]

-What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:koikoibuddy9

-How old are you?:15, I turn 16 in 3 months

-Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Sure am

-Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Nope

-Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Sure have

-What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The one about arguing with GM when an answer is given. I've been down that road

-How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:I was looking around trying to find a dedicated rp server and someone mentioned it on minecraftforums.net

 

 

-What is roleplaying?:acting out or performing a certain role in a strict set of rules for entertainment

-What is metagaming?:a strategy or action under a certain ruleset which uses external factors to affect the game or action

-What is powergaming?:powergaming is where you act towards a certain goal in a game to get the most amount of progress done in a certain area, I prefer to call it grinding but hey that's me

 

 

Character’s name:Icarius Fiori

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:26

-Biography: Icarius was born in the forests of Adrallan, into the Fiori house. His family was a pack of nomadic monks who spent their time spreading their knowledge. Icarius never really cared for their beliefs and instead spent his time enjoying the nature he encountered along his way. While not among the most skilled of fighters, he was not defenseless, as he had been jumped by numerous creatures when wandering from his family from time to time. He did not possess any blade, and used a walking stick he carried around with him as a "spear". He enjoyed using it for both hiking and keeping his distance in a fight. One day during their adventures between Annil'sul and Kal'agnar, his family was mugged and killed when he had wandered off as usual. When he returned to their camp, he was devastated to find the remains of his family. He wandered off to seek revenge, but to this day he had not found the souls of his family's killers.

-Personality Traits:Shy, quiet, compassionate, secretive. Sometimes lashes out when talking about a personal subject. Is quite humorous when one has become a good friend of his.

-Ambitions:Finding his family's killers, carrying on his family name, and making friends.

-Strengths/Talents:Is skilled with spears/polearms. Quite agile but is not strong enough to wear much armor. Also skilled in hand to hand combat, coming from a family of monks. Is a quick thinker and pretty smart. Has a toned, agile body, but is not stronger than most trained knights.

-Weaknesses/Inabilities:Sometimes his ambitions can lead him into dangerous situations rather than thinking thoroughly, has a soft spot for certain things (will refuse to kill most animals as he has spent most of his life in nature)

-Appearance: Icarius is 5'9" and is toned, but not comparable to the likes of a body builder. He wears red robes over normal citizen clothing, a typical wanderer's outfit. His hair is a moderate length and has brown eyes that match the color of his hair. He would be a charmer, but rather prefers to keep to himself. He weighs 131 pounds and is overall comparable to any other man you would see walking down the streets.

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming definition is very close to the wiki definition and needs to be expanded upon.
• Your powergaming definition is incorrect.
• The current Dwarven capital is Kal'Karaad
• Your family dying and seeking revenge is very cliche and done a lot within applications, I would recommend changing it to make it more unique. 
• The application format isn't complete, please use the full format which can be found here. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/125096-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/
• The part of your application missing is your characters skin screenshot and his appearance. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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