[Denied] First Application

[MonarchyRules 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Matlovesjackie

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no trolling 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?a friend recommended me the server since he knew i had a deep passion for role-playing servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:taking the form of a character that you have created.

What is metagaming?:metagaming is when u take gain an advantage using unfair or rule breaking methods

What is powergaming?:is going above and beyond the capability of your character

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Barkral Dain

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:drawf

Character’s age:145

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Barkral Dain, a young unimportant dwarf living in the Dwarven capital of Kal'Asgoth. He has lived his 145 years mining away and drinking ale just like his good ol' dad does. However, Barkral isn't having the time of his life. He has started looking at his world in a different view. Living day-to-day doing the same thing over and over doesn't appeal to him anymore.  He longs for the glory of war and the pride he will bring to his family. 

Barkral's 145th birthday has come and he has made up his mind. He tells his parents that he is leaving to go join the Dwarven legion and to bring honour and glory to him and his families name. After his mother had finally stopped crying over the thought of losing her son, and his father comforting her. The parents agree that if this is what he thinks is best, then they shall not get in the way. So Barkral Dain sets out to bring fame, fortune and glory to his families name, And to seek Adventure wherever it lies!

 

Personality Traits:Curious and Adventurous. 

Ambitions:To climb the legion's ranks and bring fame and fortune to his families name while seeking adventure whereever it is.

Strengths/Talents:Strong and willing

Weaknesses/Inabilities:overly curious and rushes to judgement

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):average dwarven height and well built. long ginger beard with thick ginger eyebrows.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://imgur.com/yXviezg

 

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Both your metagaming and your powergaming definitions are incorrect.
• Your biography is very short and needs to be expanded upon.
• Your biography lacks current server lore which can be found on the wiki (here) http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Kal'Azgoth is an old city of the Dwarves, the current capital is Kal'Karaad.
• At the age of 145, detail server lore applicable to change your character including things like the trip from Anthos to the temp maps and Athera.
• Expand on your characters strengths and weaknesses.

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.