[Denied] Supervegetios Server Application

[SuperVegetio 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  SuperVegetio

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https//www.lordofthecraft.net/user/72783-supervegetio/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:All of the RP rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I looked up medieval servers and I found it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a role as someone that isn't yourself.

What is metagaming?: Having knowledge that you have but character has no way of obtaining.

What is powergaming?: Making your character overpowered and doing unrealistic things.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Alex Travandor

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography:  Alexs  Life Wasnt, Anything Awesome He Was a only Child His Mother Died When He Was Only Nine Years Old. His Mother Died By A Raid Of Orcs Only His Father Survived My Father Only Took Care Of Until I Was Ten Then He Left Me With His Friend Jacob His Best Friend  Then 8 Years Later i Turned 18. I Moved Out From Jacobs House And Started My Adventure To Look For My Father.

 

 

 

So I Stayed At Athera For A Bit He Talked To Some Nice People But  Jacob Told Me How My Mother Died Mother Died My Father Took Too Much Money From The Orcs They Killed My Mother

The Orcs Knew That It Would  Hurt My Father In A Sad Why So Thats Why He Left Me With Jacob

He Said He Will Till Me More Things When I Turned 18 So I went I Turned 18 I Promised I Will Look For Him.

 

Ambitions:To Become A Great Fighter And Find His Father

Strengths/Talents: Can Lift Up To 250 lbs  And Can Run Really Fast

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  He is Not Good With Any Types For Melee Wepons

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height; 6.5 Weight 119

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin:-http://imgur.com/gallery/fMiSi8M/new 

[John Ivory 4547]

Denied

• You plagiarized all three of your definitions from this application.
• Your grammar needs a vast improvement, it is at times hard to read your application.
• You need to include some lore into the biography of your character.
• Elaborate more on your character's traits.
• You applied before the end of your 24 hour cool-down period.

This is a warning. Do not plagiarize again.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[John Ivory 4547]

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